L.i.- wtf is with the periods to creat a whole line??? retarded... anyway
nice punches
flow was aight but not that great
nice personals
good wordplay
structure needs to be worked on
Script- what the hell? i got confused reading that...
your flow was all jacked up.. although u had some good punches in there. you had some good vocab goin on there. i liked that. your verse sounded more intellegent and the punches hit a lil harder...
my vote goes to you script