It aint rite....Not right 4 me....It aint rite.... Dont sleep on dis

[absolutezero]

terrorism
walking with one leg

VERSE 1
What kind of life have i got..Im not really happy at whole..
The constant pain and regret..forever trapped at my soul..
Adapt to the cold..My depressed state of mind is crazy..
My eyes are blind and hazy..Lookin for a reason..But cant seem to find it lately..
The times have made me..Take a second to realize the pain..
Be aligned and sane..But dark clouds surround..My tearin eyes like rain..
What have we tried to gain..Life in itself is just a question to yearn..
The answer lies in death..With a mystrious lesson to learn..
Deserve afftection you earned..Feel like my life as a whole was took..
Cuz its like gods reading my life story..And he closed the book..
Alone i look..At the possible solutions to the confusion im facin..
The illusions is racin..The conclusion are choosin what im losin is patience..
No immunization..No remedy to the absolute test of endurance..
Best of insurance..Cuz the pains great no less of the burdens..
Testin the urgance..But im seeing light..Cuz of a friend that arose..
Slowly approachin a detour..Its the end of the road..

CHORUS
The life i lead
its not rite for me
But i know one day..the time will come
When my problems will all be done..
The pain..the hurt..the tears..the bad..
The days i cried from the fear i had..
Everyday gets worse..Whats next for me..
Futures a question..With no destiny..

VERSE 2
Its almost as if i can predict my fall..Its clear my fate is gone..
Not in a state of strong..Not right for me..I always still take the wrong..
Not awake for long..Be down since the pain never left..
Havent had a better depth..Always been bad from the pain forever kept..
One lesser breath..I take in each daily moment of silence..
On frozen assignments..My minds still as if ive chosen the violence..
Components of science..Clearly state the law of gravity..
Holds us down..But feel as if im told to frowned..By myself..
I saw it happenin..Need a guard of relief..A part of belief..
Heart really weak..Im a brick wall..DAM..its hard to be me..
Startin to see..Somethin that isnt even there..A fantasy frame..
DAM'll be saved..But the message fades away..Forget the plan to be sane..
Damage we claim..Meanin the hits we recieved..Ive acquired so much..
Come thru in the aspiring clutch..But need a hand..Require a touch..
Inspired by tough..No where to go..Been overthrown..The guard is away..
Its harder to pray..Cuz its almost like im reachin for the stars in the day..

CHORUS
The life i lead
its not rite for me
But i know one day..the time will come
When my problems will all be done..
The pain..the hurt..the tears..the bad..
The days i cried from the fear i had..
Everyday gets worse..Whats next for me..
Futures a question..With no destiny..

[tourn]

Aight duke.....first verse...you were off and on dope....yoru vocabulary is fuckin nice though...chrous was dope as shit...your second verse not really a flaw in it....the second verse was dope as shit as was the closing....nice job homie...

[Mistral]

Pretty good piece here man....really enjoyed it....read through this quite smoothly never really had any trouble with the flow at all, every went good through the entire piece...had some nice multies in this as well, i like them a multie person kinda i guess you could say lol...liked the content of the piece...it was good...overall a nice piece, enjoyed the read.