10 lines
house rules
i set up
you spit first
45 minutes to drop
Vagrant Scorn
B.X.P
10 lines
house rules
i set up
you spit first
45 minutes to drop
checking in
check.............................................
ya battle record's seven - four, I'm about to make it seven - five
like the age you wish you was whenever Michael Jackson "comes" by
This kid is trying to come at me when he got merked by jug.
but what do you expect from a dyslexic when his spit is ly-ug
B.X.P. is on the next level, but I'm two steps above him
talently, he'll only see me if he look up to heaven
you say to "Fear the X" but there's no reason to start believin'
that B.X.P. will land a punch in this Rap Battle textcee season
your IP ends in "Fate to be" but it forgot "given a loss"
Cause Bastard X. Performers won't battle me without learning the cost
Good luck, B.X.P.
Oh, to explain the "Fate to be" thing, look at his IP code at the top. The last part of it is "F82B" if you look at it like "F8 2 B", it's like a license plate trying to spell out "fate to be".
sorry..power went out...had to reboot the comp...
ill post in a minute..
blah....
Battling me shows you have balls kid..so turn your head and cough
cause im takin scissors to your driveway to literally cut your path off
You actually tryin to front with me now your ass is on the Line..
Cause you will never be at my level since your ass is always behind
A fuckin Herb like a rising singer with no fans just a whack band
You could be on a world full of bitches you still couldnt be the man
All bets are off cause Im holding the winning hand..no need to try hard
Cause im looking at you with complete contempt....total disregard*
you don’t belong here...you must visiting.... so enjoy your stay
Your not ready for battle, your lost cause elavation is this way
*Scorn- Extreme contempt
*Contempt- disregard
No problem man. My power always goes out too, haha. We got a generator though.
let me edit some things...
Battling me shows you have balls kid..so turn your head and cough
cause im takin scissors to your driveway to literally cut your path off
You actually tryin to Front with me now your ass is on the Line..
Cause you will never be at my level since your ass is always behind
A fuckin Herb like a rising singer with no fans just a whack band
You could be on a world full of bitches you still couldnt be the man
All bets are off cause Im holding the winning hand..no need to try hard
Cause im looking at you with complete contempt....total disregard*
you don’t belong here...you must visiting.... so enjoy your stay
Your not ready for battle, your lost cause elavation is this way
*Scorn- Extreme contempt
*Contempt- disregard
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ya battle record's seven - four, I'm about to make it seven - five
like the age you wish you was whenever Michael Jackson "comes" by
not wordplay, elementary..
This kid is trying to come at me when he got merked by jug.
but what do you expect from a dyslexic when his spit is ly-ug
meh... average
B.X.P. is on the next level, but I'm two steps above him
talently, he'll only see me if he look up to heaven
nah...
you say to "Fear the X" but there's no reason to start believin'
that B.X.P. will land a punch in this Rap Battle textcee season
nah.
your IP ends in "Fate to be" but it forgot "given a loss"
Cause Bastard X. Performers won't battle me without learning the cost
nah...
Battling me shows you have balls kid..so turn your head and cough
cause im takin scissors to your driveway to literally cut your path off
decent..
You actually tryin to front with me now your ass is on the Line..
Cause you will never be at my level since your ass is always behind
nah
A fuckin Herb like a rising singer with no fans just a whack band
You could be on a world full of bitches you still couldnt be the man
nah
All bets are off cause Im holding the winning hand..no need to try hard
Cause im looking at you with complete contempt....total disregard*
decent
you don’t belong here...you must visiting.... so enjoy your stay
Your not ready for battle, your lost cause elavation is this way
played.
weak battle, BXP gets this..
v/BXP
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...21#post1569621
Damn homie,
In highschool i beat the shit out of you and ya man homie,
Ya girl wanna blow me and dont even know me,
she lonely and she think you phonie,
i take a piss on a development deal from sony.
Nice spit.
^you had a good verse for a newbie...
just in case some people dont understand that ass line..
ass=behind? get it...?
vagrant
ya battle record's seven - four, I'm about to make it seven - five
like the age you wish you was whenever Michael Jackson "comes" by
weak
This kid is trying to come at me when he got merked by jug.
but what do you expect from a dyslexic when his spit is ly-ug
your best punch
B.X.P. is on the next level, but I'm two steps above him
talently, he'll only see me if he look up to heaven
hardly hit, weak
you say to "Fear the X" but there's no reason to start believin'
that B.X.P. will land a punch in this Rap Battle textcee season
wack, weak,
your IP ends in "Fate to be" but it forgot "given a loss"
Cause Bastard X. Performers won't battle me without learning the cost
lol, using the IP, lol, not hard hitting though
just keep battling an you'll get better.
B.X.P
Battling me shows you have balls kid..so turn your head and cough
cause im takin scissors to your driveway to literally cut your path off
nice
You actually tryin to Front with me now your ass is on the Line..
Cause you will never be at my level since your ass is always behind
not bad, but not hard hitting
A fuckin Herb like a rising singer with no fans just a whack band
You could be on a world full of bitches you still couldnt be the man
could of been worded better
All bets are off cause Im holding the winning hand..no need to try hard
Cause im looking at you with complete contempt....total disregard*
solid
you don’t belong here...you must visiting.... so enjoy your stay
Your not ready for battle, your lost cause elavation is this way
didnt land
keep battlin.
vote-B.X.P
better punches
plz hit up the battle in my sig.
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Uppin, and whoever reads any of this. When you break it down, tell me what I need to improve on please. I'm just trying to elevate.
ya battle record's seven - four, I'm about to make it seven - five
like the age you wish you was whenever Michael Jackson "comes" by
Nah, kinda lame
This kid is trying to come at me when he got merked by jug.
but what do you expect from a dyslexic when his spit is ly-ug
ly-ug, i don't get it? What does that mean?
B.X.P. is on the next level, but I'm two steps above him
talently, he'll only see me if he look up to heaven
it's alright, but it's been played many times before
you say to "Fear the X" but there's no reason to start believin'
that B.X.P. will land a punch in this Rap Battle textcee season
prolly your best line.. not too great, but it was alright, just needed better wording
your IP ends in "Fate to be" but it forgot "given a loss"
Cause Bastard X. Performers won't battle me without learning the cost
you had a good starter, but it ended weakly.. you probably could have made this hit
Battling me shows you have balls kid..so turn your head and cough
cause im takin scissors to your driveway to literally cut your path off
Ok, but nothing really special here
You actually tryin to front with me now your ass is on the Line..
Cause you will never be at my level since your ass is always behind
Eh, again ok, but nothing great, doesn't hit hard
A fuckin Herb like a rising singer with no fans just a whack band
You could be on a world full of bitches you still couldnt be the man
hehe, not bad
All bets are off cause Im holding the winning hand..no need to try hard
Cause im looking at you with complete contempt....total disregard*
not a good ending, but ok
you don’t belong here...you must visiting.... so enjoy your stay
Your not ready for battle, your lost cause elavation is this way
yeah, been played but not bad
Overall - I wasn't really feeling either verse, but I think BXP's punches hit slightly harder and had slightly better flow so I'm giving this to him.
Vote - BXP
Please return the favor fellas
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