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    Hit N Run

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    Outside it’s dripping, clouds heavy set My minds tripping..... about every fact....concerning death I imagine me dying......just learning rap Crying when.................. wording wack...my eyes turning red Rolling back in my head....I’m gone for a sec Bbbblllllllapppp.....all I here is a crack a scream cross the scene.....is this a dream Oh Geez plz let it be just a motherfucking dream Let it be nothing real....some imagination My heart starts racin...body in tragic patience I’m glued to my seat the steering wheel embracin Slowly facin the fact, that was of human race I just wrecked So I re-inject the key knowin’ there’s no help for me It’s my fucking fault the cards have been dealt for me I’d lose my life committing just like this brother Shivvering just like his mother discovering his corpse Watching evening news not bothering bout laws and remorse, porks going to court...forth and forth like they got bad news in store Then she’s moving tow’rd the screen ........a scream......aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh back in my car, ready to dial....my head in denial am I ready for trial....I’m already fragile my life is braking....the night is taking....sun slowly shows I might be mistakin....god’s son only knows... So....all I know is motherfucking Hit N Run So i get my gun n finish this son.....Spittin’ some....


    Ill Game
    dead bodies floating threw my dreams
    lifeless and blodie thats all i see
    thought i was cool, thought i was a g
    all the other kids wanna be just like me
    but it gotta stop somewherre
    and maybe it was with that gunblast
    its time to jump into the future and get outa the past
    every singles breath u take might be ur last
    pass by hit the gas cold nine sprays at spines
    giving multi shots like rap battle lines


    G-Money
    its poorin, stormin, the street im ignorin
    drink after drink the faster im goin
    little im knowin, that fates' gonna be showin
    the windsheild wippers goin hella fast
    do i give a fuck? naw im still gon mash
    all of a sudden theres a crash, a smash
    i open my eyes to see my body full of incisions
    do i get out to see or leave its a tuff decision
    so i get the balls to go out
    n see dude laid the fuck out
    i turn em over to see em, n its my neighbor
    n *sigh* look up n ask for forgivness from my savor
    so i check to see his pulse
    not lookin to good so his body i gotta expose
    u see the news jus another episode of HiT N RuN
    the way my conscience is on me, i dont think im live to see thirty-one


    djb
    Emotionless moments make motions lethargic
    moving away from my prey after I hit the target
    ah shit, don’t know how to deal with my reckless madness
    no remorse or sadness just another ravished body left damaged
    had him, took by the impact, ejected forcefully from where he sat
    too cold I didn’t look back to see the body flying threw the glass
    heart beats fast, mashed on the gas trying blow past the past
    flashed visions of prison livin’, nightmares of the crucial crash
    stashed memories of a slashed victim commemorates my cowardness
    heartlessness profound by limited actions, no sympathy just passiveness
    conscious calm like lake glassiness clear like glasses focused on after this
    massive amounts of masquerades cloud my mind, making a bad marriage
    correlating with the crash, calculating steps for the future, watching my past
    aghast seeing ghosts everytime I hear brakes scratch remembering the smash
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    good drop by everyone but yo djb what's with the layout?...edit this give each mc a different colour n press the enter key between the verses....plus what's with the structure my verse is in...was it like that when I send it to u?...lyrically this was good but I'm still disappointed that this crew can't do a fucking collb with everyone on it...pz
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    uppin.............................................

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    '(Hit N Run) Good colab'bo not great .. Far from hall of fame material but sick reguardless....I can see why B/B's mad the structure really hurt the flow here I read through it twich and the flow came together but the vocab wasent there....I not much worried about vocab thought .. I dont use my vocab.....
    *Ill-game brought nothing to the Song ..
    *G-Money bought good visuals and word play .
    * DJB Just crushed it Great flow Real profesional..But whats with the Colors ?
    Thanks guys Nice crew read ... Suport the Cause... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=154357

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    G-Money
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    upppin .... ................................

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    Ill-game brought nothing to the Song

    word to that, his sucked it up... you should edit that out, but DJB or whatever had the best... his was cool.
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    first crew collab up.
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    Personaly i think G-Money had the best verse. Reason he had a nice flow, really good vocab in the rhymes. The rest of you were really good to. I would like it if you threw in a chorse between the verses.

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    I would have really liked to get in on this collab but no one in my crew likes me
    lmao

    I was joking...lol
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    yo this is from way back duo...like the first days of the crew so chill...my verse wasn't all that bad the structure was just gay...lol...anyways vive la ol times
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