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    Frozen Flayme
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    a few words i had to say

    The trafic within makes us drasticly sin. Slowly await the results of our faults, as we hault till we're told to begin. Told to go on wit our pleasures, so we take drastic measures. To avoid the demanding. We avoid in which we're planning. Shattered dream, whatever matters seems to tear at the seams. it seems to disappear in thin air. Hopes are no longer there. We made our beds, we slept with deadly weeps, we hide under cover.

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    I take percautions when i'm walkin in a world full of snakes. You'ld be alarmed at how much harm they can do when they hate. They make me nervous when they're friendly, I can tell when they envy.i take drastic measures to determine if wheather, they're on my side, cause the hide, right behind sheep attire. They can sense my deffense, hence, lawyers sound like liars. From a certain point of view they point the finger at you. They can blame, shame your name or just break you.

  2. #2
    Full Circle
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    truthfully spoken well..especially in the second part
    of this shit man


    what I could realte with for readin it=

    or when inviduals tend to ask questions they know the
    answers to when times for you are critical........

    "They can sense my deffense, hence, lawyers sound like liars. From a certain point of view they point the finger at you. They can blame, shame your name or just break you."

    Frozen Flame....that was truthfully spoken well

  3. #3
    danja
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    loved the flow in this one dude the second part is so true great!

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    It was a very tru piece,
    I dont really understand ya entire base behind it tho....
    But very ill linez...
    They can sense my deffense, hence, lawyers sound like liars. From a certain point of view they point the finger at you. They can blame, shame your name or just break you.

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