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  1. #1
    danja
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    everyday soldier..

    expressions given by an everyday survivor
    giving impressions that each day he's growing stronger
    but you could never be more wrong, expressions are opaque
    for if its linear on the surface inside there are breaks
    it takes more than a man to admit that he's grieving
    the worse thing you could perform is to go on disbelieving
    but hes trying and therefore grateful for his gift
    the one that god gave him when he took his first breath
    present times for him cause distinguished dreams
    nothings what it seems, transparent asthough hes unseen
    nor heard, when awoken his underspoken past blurs
    his minds' a slur as if left behind in society
    im trying o so hard is there no helping me?
    yes i am that person, constantly pondering wondering
    what life is about, i'll make it either way with or without
    and in the end we'll all grow older, but at least i can look back..

    knowing i was a soldier.

    another one from me just explaining how im feelin used some real expression here, please give ya comments always appriciated

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    Gunz -N- $tackZ
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    dat was some serious shyt. keep spittin da real. uno doggy
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  3. #3
    danja
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    thanks man appriciated, keep em coming... uppin
    Last edited by danja; July 9th, 2002 at 12:34 PM

  4. #4
    danja
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    uppin pls comment

  5. #5
    the illestchic
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    Dis was a tight piece keep doing ur thang


    ~Late Welcome ~

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