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    •madd•Professor•
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    •Seething•Blizzard•(Life-101)•

    (hook, borrowed from Eminem's chorus from "Kim", re-worded)


    lyrical infractions catch pain in words and action/
    when culture satisfaction became a national subtraction/
    laughin' at your brother from another mother coughing up blood/
    thinking its a joke when he's scoffing with a shrug/
    to your every piece of advice that finally ends with an uncompleted life/
    a defeated knife lies in the street, never had to fight to enter our home/
    once upon a time *BANG* now i'm all alone/

    so long, *click* you were so strong, what would go wrong, in this world all about you/
    so long, *click* you were so strong, what would go wrong, in this world all about you/

    feel the pain, feel the rain of collected tears/
    count the seconds of selected years given to kids these days/
    when kids give in to freeways out this life, makin' death a relay/
    i don't have enough breath to speak what i say, so i just dream it/
    watch the world spin on a president's finger trying to reach it/
    when i can't bleed its sorrow for the story... it begins and ends/
    once upon a time *BANG* no one pretends/

    so long, *click* you were so strong, what would go wrong, in this world all about you/
    so long, *click* you were so strong, what would go wrong, in this world all about you/

    i miss all the friends i've never had, i miss all the experience that i've never grabbed/
    in another life, i'd wanna do this twice, just to feel what i'm feeling now/
    never would i wanna be that kid with the car playing Eminem really loud/
    or the next vanilla ice thinking that i'm feeling proud/
    testing 1. 2. umm... 12, "can you feel me now?"/
    i just washed the mirror with windex, "that's the real me... wow"/
    i'm in my room filling up the chamber/
    "i'm sorry world, i just want you to feel my anger"/
    *BANG* 6 and 10 o' clock news, no more neighborhood stranger/

    so long, *click* you were so strong, what would go wrong, in this world all about you/
    so long, *click* you were so strong, what would go wrong, in this world all about you/
    so long, *BANG* i thought i was so strong... i was so wrong, living in this world not about me/(fade)


    signed,
    ~ProfessoR

  2. #2
    LaDy TrInItY
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    hey...

    nice piece kidd...hmm glad to see more peeps postin up in this area...much luv..God bless..always elevate...1.

  3. #3
    ShaYneA
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    to your every piece of advice that finally ends with an uncompleted life/

    that was a hott bar hun..........it stuck out to me......kinda of a serious issue...n all.........but you pulled it off well............props...and peep mah peice below please........much luv........oh yea teh format was nice n even very nice

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    [*¤ĐîMęŘńФ* ]
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    Dope ish babyboi,
    flowed well ...
    Diggin ya style!

    Keep doin ur thang ...

    Pz xXx DiMe
    ~1~

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    very good piece all the way through...worded so well...structured so well....overall was a well executed piece...had some real strong truths....some cynical....some not so....

    ...respect....
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