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    ~~ToLerAnCe~~

    Im gained by doin drugs too often,usin slugs to soften,smokin wit thugs and coughin//
    smoke an ounce a day and tha high wont come back,need tha high from that so u want some crack//
    lets not jump ahead,too much TOLERANCE and you could be dead,takin blunts to tha head//
    eventually change-to-cane,line after linell stain-ya-brain,years of abuse will mame-ya-frame//
    turnin all skinny,u as wide across as a broken penny,rock tha snow up and smoke it plenty//
    crystal meth is next,feel tha pain in ya chest and know ya hexed,sniffin glass and ice,wanna better deal better ask-tha-price//
    then theres people who boil ther poison,shoot into there vein and toil wit noises//
    directly effect-the perception of reality,in-depth except for tha brain abnormalitys//
    cause a negative effect on ya seeds,brain tumors and such causin nose and ears to bleed//
    skip tha hallucinogens cause most are for tha teens,even though tha freak outs cause tha screams,and horrible visions plague ya dreams//
    even though i skipped a few you get tha point of tha story,drugs lead to TOLERANCE which leads to an end so gory,where theres no glory.


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    this is a tight piece yall dont sleep on this.


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    This was a tight verse, the vocab wasdope you got a nice flow, the structure was good all the way through.
    It was a deep sort of short story rhyme, i like this piece a lot.

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    thanks son.~1~


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    flow is pretty solid oin this... lyrics were nice too... only thing i didn't like is how you have "him" going from crack to meth..... Once youy strung on crack, the next step is poking...

    but besindes that the verse was pretty str8.. flow was definitly there..... nice length too.... Overall nice drop dogg

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    honestly i know tha addiction ring cause unfortunatley ive done it,theres no set pattern that u have to stick to,i slammed meth for a long time my self,but believe me there is no set pattern that u have to follow to be ADDICTED to drugs,its whatever falls to u first.~1~


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