Elements of Desire (Lyric and XNottyxBabeX)

[Laureate]

Water = XNottyxBabeX
Fire = Lyric

Elements of Desire

You run up to me, like a quiet river of love
Sweet words flowing, saying things you should of
Captivating me with those dark pools you call your eyes
It’s more than you realize how you leave me hypnotized
Your love so divine as you begin to part my sea
Sending waves of sensation as you touch and enter me
Holding my body as we engage in rhythmic motions
You are my safety net, drowning in orgasmic oceans
Exploring the depths of my deep, sweet abyss
Letting the liquids flow with one single kiss
We float up like buoys, down like sunken ships
Tasting the salts as they linger on my tender lips
You roll my hips east to west like the soft flowing wind
Your anchor sinking deeper, causing the very best of sin
Juices trickle down us and romance fills the air
Soaking my body with you, especially ‘right there’
Our bodies mix together into a solution of passion
Icy chills run up my spine as I fulfill my obsession
Lust seeping through, I scratch down your chest
Rubbing softly over your heart and all of the rest
Moving so swiftly on these rapids of desire
Decide to change pace and allow you to light my fire

Sweat winds down my skin, I’m dripping with our love
Droplets collect on my chin, licked off by your tongue
Our flames lick the sky, stretching up to the heavens
Worries evaporate, from the heat in our possession
The windows are steamed, concealing our desire
Your warmth calls to me, only one log in your fire
Bodies rubbing together, the friction is shocking
Our chemistry is electric, no signs of sparks stopping
Your face is flushed and waiting, hips gently swaying
Blush with anticipation, from the rush of copulation
The air is hot and humid, your curly hair flys
Boiling together fluids, I’m stirring your insides
We reach a feverish pace, prod the coals to ignite
Explore every devious place, every hole grips me tight
Your moans echo off me, burning impressions in the sheets
An orchestra of sounds, gasping screams and bed squeaks
One last final thrust, we both shudder in unison
You squeeze out every last ounce, as we reach the conclusion
Our bodies glimmer shadows flicker, innocence surrendered
The blaze allowed to simmer, down to glowing embers

[Laureate]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=167435

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=167378

[Mesmerize]

wow, you guys, this was awesome. One of the best collabs ive read. Notty, you worded your lines so beautifully, very poetic. You had some nice symbolizm and flow was smooth. Structure was also good. Every line you wrote, connected so perfectly with the next. Lyric, you done a great job in keeping the same style and structure. Your emotion and imagery was awesome. Your part fit perfectly with hers. Really nice stuff. Kept me pulled into everyline.Keep up the dopeness

peace,
Mez

[Kaotic Theory]

you guys hit this one off perfect, the flow by both of your were smooth,the emotion was raw in this...it really hit a certain level of feeling,the imagery was very vivid..,with a okay amount of vocabulary and word use,and the structure and format were nicely done,but overall i liked the take to this topic by both of you,the concept was interesting and certainly not played....so yeah nice drope fam keep it up.....

[Bloom.Quist]

Dope...all i can say...

I'm stunned.

Who's nottybabe?...

[Violent.]

Woah This Was Nice, Had Great Flow And Both Peices Flowed Together

Vocab Was Good And It Had Great Imagery

Keep It Up

[Laureate]

thanks Mez and KT

[CelticOne]

safe to say youve earned yaself a fan. damn, this shit is the best piece ive seen since i been to this site, no doubt (although that aint too long). the imagery the descriptiveness it was just immersive dog. the flow didnt fall off, not once, the structure was constant, i was way feelin this shit. fuckin ill concept. make an audio of it

please yall return the fave on my battle, it's gettin slept on..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=167708

i'd appreciate it

[sILLable]

well i dont really know what to say,this was the illest collab ive seen,mad props to both of you,this shit was just perfect,i dont personaly think anything was wrong with it,beautiful,hit my pieces up,peeps asleep always in here.keep droppin tha hotness yall.~1~

[XNottyxBabeX]

Thanks to all of you guys for the great replies, it is greatly appreciated

[Scarcasm]

damn yall really came together well with this peice. most collabs seem some what fragmented but this was not at all. I really like how you guys decided to explore the grittyness of sexuality. you also bypassed any denounment and I think that really works for this peice, especially since it's about reaching a climax. was that intentional? If I were to have one complaint about this peice it would be that I thought the descriptions were a bit too abstract at times.(not so much from Lyric) but it was a good peice;I'm inspired I think I'm going to go out and get laid.

[Brother Blue Collar]

damn i got kinda stiff after reading this, dope shit you both

lines from notty that i liked
You run up to me, like a quiet river of love
Sweet words flowing, saying things you should of
>love the flow there good rhyme with of and love
Exploring the depths of my deep, sweet abyss
Letting the liquids flow with one single kiss
>i think this line is relative to pussy eating, but i like the way you put it
You roll my hips east to west like the soft flowing wind
Your anchor sinking deeper, causing the very best of sin
> favorite line from ya whole shit

Lyric's Lines
Your face is flushed and waiting, hips gently swaying
Blush with anticipation, from the rush of copulation
> dope copulation and swaying is a good rhyme i had to say it a couple times tho
Our bodies glimmer shadows flicker, innocence surrendered
The blaze allowed to simmer, down to glowing embers
>I loved the ending

good shit plz check out mine

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=168302

[Devastator™]

The chemistry in this collaboration was awesome. What I liked the most was the combination of imagery and the rhyming. It sounds like Notty was talking abouts me though. Thanx for giving me something exciting to read guys.

[djb]

this was a very nice piece, one of the best i have read in some time. you two compliment each other very nicely. i liked the idea and the way you two approached this. both veruses were equally good i thought. i didnt really find anything that i didnt like or that bugged me other then in lyrics verse he had a comma that i thought could have been left out. where he said exploring the depths of my deep, sweet abyss. i dunno i guess it is just the choice of the writer on that one. you guys both had a very nice meter and syllable count. i also like the word choices in this one. you two were pretty much dead on with that. and the multi's and enternals made this a much more interesting read and made everything feel more urgent and important. good job. i am a big fan of both of you.

[XNottyxBabeX]

^^Thanks, but lyric didnt write the first verse... lol i did.. i think you got the two confused ...