everything happens for a reason

[djb]

da youngsta
First we was like Bonnie and Clyde just riding and cruising
Then the relationship turned dull winning converted to losing
I guess that was the sign that we would soon break-up
I noticed you switched your style and used different make-up
Making love to us really duplicated having teenage sex
We use to be inseparable even when I was spitting on wax
Now were apart from each other thinking about what we had
How it end up like this? I just finished from meeting your dad
I guess everything happens for a reason God’s got my plans
I learn from my mistakes so next time I’ll just fuck fans
But what we had defined special I saw my future wit you
I was there by your side for comfort when you had an issue
Now where both moved on with different views and motives
I guess the reason for that was because I scratched my votives
I wasn’t there when you needed me we never had romance
Maybe this was meant to be but I still deserve another chance
I don’t really understand why our love miraculously perished
Maybe the reason was to keep a special someone cherished
Thank you for staying beside me when I was called a heaven
Even though I’ll miss you everything happens for a reason
djb
True everything happens for a reason but I cant control
my soul wanted to escape, but my mind began to pull
I wanted to explain but instead I took it to my grave
I became a cool wave from a flame movin’, from paved
our concrete relationship faced devilish discreet deceit
I wanted to stand still but my heart pumped my feet
so I flee, turn and exit closing memories and possibilities
chances taken possibly cost me, dirty is the way it seems
I love you so much, miss your stare, hair, glance and touch
must admit when u clasped me I collapsed in ecstasy’s blush
such a mistake to take the road I took has me utterly shook
you were my king and I was your queen in our little nook
but what threw it was a late night visit from your boy
he toyed with toys of destruction forcing a cruel ploy
coy with speech and actions masking his pro mackin’
he made a drink and I didn’t think but drank in reaction
lights dimmed and blackened, compassion attracted
X managed to release a savage who raped, advantaged
that grated I woke somber to find HIV was contracted
couldn’t tell why I left but that’s the reason it happened

[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

[djb]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=168633
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=169097

[STAT$]

Damn everyone is sleeping on this.............Well they're missing out very nice piece on both parts.......very nice collab Flow was nice and everything else was on point great job!

[Omniscient]

thanks 4 the feed man appreciate it

[Sigur Ros]

dude nice collab, It had a lot of good flos and nice structure both of y'all if you guys get a chance vote on my battles plz...keep it up I liked this piece it was very well written nice rhymes both of you!!!!

[Omniscient]

cool dogg_uppin 4 more feed people

[noncentz]

all togeather a very solid peace both cats compliment eachotehr well

[ELEETE]

This was a good collab...you both fit each others thoughts and scheme very well...though i feel this could have been a bit stronger in the sense of imagery it wasnt a bad collab at all...this was a good piece...an sad to see people are sleeping on this because ive already began to noticed since i came back djb your on your way to become one the top heads here in OM...nice drop both of you...you guys had this locked down good...respect...keep at it...djb i got my eye on you dawg...Collab?-E-

[Omniscient]

thanks homies appreciate the feed

[Omniscient]

Uppin_

[Relic_Writes]

Very nice,... i liked.... good meta's and rhyme waves... liked second verse better...
Relic Writes

[Illus']

Ok....


Nice use of vocabulary and a nice story line.
I liked it somewhat and didn't like it.
I liked this piece due to I can relate in away
didn't like it because me and my woman
just broke up. But bleh....nice multies
you could have used better vocab to express
yourself better and some lines...however for
the most part it was straight. a couple of
lines caught my eyes..

"I<a onMouseOver="window.status='' ; return true;" onMouseOut="window.status='';" oncontextmenu="window.status=''; return true;" onclick="location.href='http://www.enhancemysearch.com/admin/results.php?q=Love&id=31';return false;" href="" TITLE="More Info..."> love </a>you so much, miss your stare, hair, glance and touch
must admit when u clasped me I collapsed in ecstasy’s blush"


and these..

"I don’t really understand why our<a onMouseOver="window.status='' ; return true;" onMouseOut="window.status='';" oncontextmenu="window.status=''; return true;" onclick="location.href='http://www.enhancemysearch.com/admin/results.php?q=Love&id=31';return false;" href="" TITLE="More Info..."> love </a>miraculously perished
Maybe the reason was to keep a special someone cherished "


Overall pretty good.

[Omniscient]

thanks man appreciate it

[djb]

thank you everybody