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check it...
okay..whether or not this is a no show..im gunna key my verse...now..
Tricksta "dickridin"? he "finds it hard" to comprehend...
you battlin "shorthanded" cuz i chopped each finger off your hand...
Show up neek?...you smokin trees...sorry but your hopeless T...
You get the "cold shoulder" and you say you have something "cold up your sleeve"...
is there something you've got to say...?well not today...
Shit without toilet paper...get your verse and wipe away...
With skills so low..it makes no difference your names odd...
And you don't keep it a 'secret' that your record is "james bond"...(0-0-7)
Its funny how i KO you come back to try and move me...
Only way you'd win "hands down" is cause i knocked you off your "two feet"....
Your Constantly beggin..."uniqk..get in my crews...Join or verse me."....
but your jussed an "injured bitch" on 'tracks' like Jackie Joiner Kersey....
shyt,juss realized this was on
sorry,ima get on it now!
lol
sorry it took so long!
only found out yesterday and i had to work all night...
a key
uniqk,tha reignin 'queen' of tha states 'gay' rap scene/
if u were twice as 'angry' u still couldnt be called 'mean'/
with a mouthful of flowers,u still couldnt 'suck' seed'/
best get 'baking dough',coz its luck ya gonna 'knead'/
like 'afghans flyin',ya short rhymes a 'crash landing'/
spittin 'nursery rhymes' and expectin to stay 'standing'?/
u can 'rott' while im 'wylin',now u can call me ur 'dogg'/ (rott-wiler)
im 'light' years 'ahead' and your just stuck in tha 'fogg'/
throw ya 'balls' in tha air,this bitchs always been 'hi-pitched'/
uniqkly over rated,to getcha votes you go 'ride-dicks'/
go searchin for 'ill' peeps to battle in 'retard' asylums/
tha only place you can find emcees n 'out-style-em'/
couldnt be 'ill' if a rat crawled outta ya mouth n 'died'/
coz this is a 'clean' 'sweep',so now ill 'brush' u aside/
Uniqk. Your verse wasnt very on point...flowed well and I was feelin the punches more. A few of your lines could have been worded much better. You beat your opponent because his wordplay was really forced. It sounds like he thinks of two words then inserts them into a bar like this
If __________ you still wouldnt be ________
thats a played set up and you could flip a new concept but you didnt. A lot of played lines...Tricksta made an attempt at multis...
Flow-Uniqk
Punches-Uniqk
wordplay-N/A
Multis-Tricksta
Overall-Uniqk
close battle, but uni had harder punches a lil wordplay good vocab
tristka was lacking vocab in some places his punches wasn't hitting as hard, iight verse overall
vote- unique
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2-0.. uNiQK..up dis
uniqk took this slightly.. his punches hit a bit harder and he flow'd betta
tricksta-off center was right it was like u took some words and just jammed um 2gether
vote uniqk
vote:uniqk
i felt that tricksta's rhymes were just gay, it made some sense but they were gay, uniqk won cuz he had better punches and a nicer flo.
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Tricksta:
even if u ate a mouth-full of flowers, us still couldnt suck-seed..
LOL
there wuz a tight line i seen by unik but i forgot how it went..but i read each verse like 3 times cuz dis wuz too close..but tricksta got my vote cuz i think he came with betta ill punches..plus unik verse wuz too choppy..
vote:tricksta
punches:tricksta
vocab:unik
metaph:unik
effort:unik
but still trick got dis 1
i'mma get me a brick and break'em down to all O's..sell em for 6 to let my clientel roll..buy 4 mo keyz,sell 2 and sit on 2... cuz i heard in the Winter they got a drought commin threw.. Get me a lick up in da UPT, tax dem niggaz tell em i want 30 a piece/-
DANE
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15.Danna Dane (Fem) <----- me
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Close battle but I thought Uniqk came hard with the punch lines...especially this one:
My vote goes to Uniqk.And you don't keep it a 'secret' that your record is "james bond"...(0-0-7)
Pretty close battle really.. just came down to the fact of which i was feelin more and well frankly..
Uniqk was the one i was feelin more..
Had good punchs(both yall didnt) as well as multis,Metaphors vocab and flow(Tricksta took tha flow tho)
But Uniqk pulld away a little with ihs punchs.. james bond part was ill, and his starter was better as well..
one
thx danna
i always get fuckin hated on in this damn league
I vote for uniqk. I was feelin his content/set up more than the other guy. T did pretty well, but I felt uniqk came a lil more unique, lol. One Hunnid.
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