Chained to Change.

[Moniker]

Is change the only constant?
or are we our own captives,
caught in the same frame.
afraid to experience new things
outside our daily routines.
How random can you be
untill even that starts becoming
predictable?
You can only reinvent the wheel
so many times untill
it doesn't even roll.
Shouldn't we be
reinventing the box instead
of retracing chalk outlines.
Our limitations are endless.
Self reserved reservoirs flood
the conscious.
Remember when reality was a dream;
reachable.
A galaxy without a black hole.
A sun with no shadow.
On the other side of the looking glass
there's a world, half full...

[Mesmerize]

Interesing read mindless. I enjoyed reading this, it was simple yet portrayed a different frame of thought, kinda made me look at things from a different perspective. I also liked the style of this, how it didnt rhyme, yet did, if you know what im saying. I especially enjoyed the ending, very nice. Another creative peice though, nice stuff as always. Keep it up.

peace,
Mez

[Micstro]

Very creative piece here. Very thought provoking which is something that I personally love. And it hits at home real well, me n my friend were just discussing routines, and change and such, so its ironic to see a piece like this.. Lol.. Anyways. This piece was nicely worded, I liked how you took common sayings and used them in this at the end. Nicely done.. There was a piece that I read that was kind of like this, I forgot who it was by... but it was a piece about truth, and his own perspective on it. And this piece reminded me of it. I think you have a very unique way of thinking, and your writings show that... This piece was nothing less than I'd expect from you fam... Stay up

-Mind

[Moniker]

thanks mez and micstro for the great replies. always appreciated.

[Moniker]

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[Bloomquist]

well spoken.

Expressed a good view. Cliche` for me...maybe cuz i think about this topic everyday in my mind...but its a great piece mind.

Peace tim.

[Prince Escobar]

Cool...this one really picked up towards the end it got progressively more profound, a credit to you indeed, since the month is almost over i think this is certainly a dope piece, im nominating for HOF cause it is very elegantly written, i admire your style of writing more than any other RB poet so kudos to you, just good overall, 1luv.