Romancing Razorblades

[prodigal_prophet]

Romancing Razorblades

She’s got a bizarre attraction.
The site of dripping blood in
action.
Just the simplicity of the edge
grazing across her soft skin.
The relief she feels is amazing.

At night when she goes to sleep
she can here them calling to her.
Every time she shuts her eyes,
there’s a red curtain.

They’re even in her dreams.
Every time she drifts off. It’s
the same place. A dark, chilly
place. Dead trees and cracked
concrete. And every night, the
dream ends the same way;
romancing razorblades.

[The Vortex]

pretty nice yo like the way it flows.. and the imagery is right on


Every time she shuts her eyes,
there’s a red curtain.

They’re even in her dreams.
Every time she drifts off.


flows well from one line to the next

pz1

[prodigal_prophet]

thanks...uppin fa more............................

[Tourniquet]

This is a great write.
The simple complexity really just assists in delivering the message.
It gives the impression of awe by the writer, fascination for such a subject.
Title is great, creative.
Nice work.

[prodigal_prophet]

thanks..uppin fa mo.

[LiL' T]

it's good