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Checking in. Good luck.
Peace
Checking in, yeah yeah yeah yada yada yada g'luck to you too
Leave your pussy attitude at the door..
..along with ya purse
On To 3-0, I Love The Wins......
your wrecked and i could be a crappy counselor ya see;
say get shit off ya chest, but i wouldnt want any on me;
shits easy, the 80's,then 'bullets' will begin to over react;
cuz i'm shootin more than 'washingtons' old nba draft;*
i'm a 'detective' to see ya gay acts, then take a meat clever;
cuz i'm 'catching this guys passes' mo than a wide receiver;
rhyme reaver, ya flow has somewhat of a desert drout;
remove ya shoulder plate, and lets see wha ya can dish out;
it's about me being tight and maybe even a scolar;
drench ya neck with soda cuz i'll be quick to pop ya collar;
i'll take ya shoulder again and put it under ya to sedate;
fuck pitches i'll use text to strike ya out over the plate;**
debate that you suck and you need more gay bosses;
if defeats are bats, i'll make sure ya get hit wit alot of losses;
more tosses, kid we got 'proof your gay' so ya not novist;
kick ya gay ass to mississippi, cause i 'state' the obvious;
like only titty suckers, your close to a dick licker;
scar ya record so you'd think it was scratch n sniff sticker;
beat cha quicker and there is nothing you can say bra;
this cat cant be touched, an it's to bad the vets got to ya;
this battle is like your head cuz i'm winning an it's swell;
took his last opponets verse, but this time he'll bite the L;
-I Could Care Less-
This kids back is killin him, cuz i'm beatin him with his spine;
I'm playin hide n seek with ur brain, an you've lost ya mind;
*Washington Bullets is a basketball team
**Theres a Strike Out Text..
Match Me
Leave your pussy attitude at the door..
..along with ya purse
no-show?
Leave your pussy attitude at the door..
..along with ya purse
No show? I've got a life, while you're just a worthless geek
Good think you posted early; I'd hate to think that took a week
My punches have you like a crackhead, the way you take hits
Your name lies; I'm the Real-Eyez, you're just a fake bitch
Little punk, probably running with a weak spineless crew...
Who couldn't go 3-0 if you were police minus two
You only get to second base when your rub your own man tits
You're not an artist; you just think so as you're hitting the canvas
Leave your eye blackened and swollen like you're winking; I'm sick
You only grasp the mic tightly because you think it's my dick
Veteran? Nah, you're just a bitch that I'm better than
My punches reach the Top Ten like I was David Letterman
Bitch, if you're number one, I need to be measured in decimals
You're such a pussy that your ass cheeks outnumber your testicles
I've got your spine jarred; so go home and learn how to rhyme hard
Your face is taking more punches than a workaholic's time card
Realize can't hold a candle to me, so now I have to slap this cat
Telling me to match your bars...bitch, I can't rhyme as wack as that
Any rhymes I spit against you are nothing but a waste of rap
So I'll just knock your cheek bones out and watch your fuckin' face collapse
Sorry for the delay. Votes...
Peace
Last edited by MC4Eyez; August 3rd, 2002 at 03:01 PM
Both Came Decent..Both Had A Even Flow..But Realize Had Harder Punches..4Eyes Had Some Nyce Ish But RealiZe Came With More Direct Hits..Plus He Worded Shit A Little Better..But 4Eyes Had Like 2 Nice Personals..Gotta Give Him Props..I Just Saw That RealiZe Took This By A Hair..
This was a pretty nice battle. Both had nice punches, but I think 4eyez took this one. That personal diss about the realeyez/fake bytch was hard. Plus I felt he was more consistent wit his attaccs. Both did fairly well all in all. Good battle.
Honestly I thought this was an even battle. I read the verses twice each, and after thinking hard, I thought 4Eyez got the battle...Reason is, I thought his verse flowed a little better and ll his lines were consistent, same with Realize, but Overall, I just thought 4Eyez came off with the better verse...
My Vote=MC4Eyez
87-2
Rb-1-0
this was ok... 4eyez had a [positive attack mode and soem ok wordplay. realize started weak got abit better then ended weak again.
Good think you posted early; I'd hate to think that took a week
that was pretty cool
Your name lies; I'm the Real-Eyez, you're just a fake bitch
hehe.. bad line with draculas count...
nothing else i liked.. btu them bars were enough really.. you killed it
vote - 4eyez
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Shit! I'm going to take out the Dracula line 'cause I just saw it in another thread. I must have seen it a few weeks ago and used it by accident. Sorry about that. Purely accidental.
Peace
REALIZE::
your wrecked and i could be a crappy counselor ya see;
say get shit off ya chest, but i wouldnt want any on me;
OK OPENER,NOT REALLY HARD AT ALL,I THOUGHT IF YOU CAME HARD HERE IT WOULDNT SEEM TOO BASIC OF A START
shits easy, the 80's,then 'bullets' will begin to over react;
cuz i'm shootin more than 'washingtons' old nba draft;*
OK SHIT HERE,NOT HARD,ALSO NOT EFFECTIVE
i'm a 'detective' to see ya gay acts, then take a meat clever;
cuz i'm 'catching this guys passes' mo than a wide receiver;
AGAIN NOT BAD,NOT HARD HITTING EITHER
rhyme reaver, ya flow has somewhat of a desert drout;
remove ya shoulder plate, and lets see wha ya can dish out;
THIS WAS NICE,I FELT THE SETUP TAKES AWAY MOST OF THE EFFECTIVENESS TO THE PUNCH,JUST HAVE TO WORK ON THE WAY YOU SETUP THIS TYPE OF LINE
it's about me being tight and maybe even a scolar;
drench ya neck with soda cuz i'll be quick to pop ya collar;
AGAIN NICE SHIT,BUT SETUP FLAWED,NOT AN EFFECTIVE PUNCH,BUT WAS GOOD
i'll take ya shoulder again and put it under ya to sedate;
fuck pitches i'll use text to strike ya out over the plate;**
OK,NOT REALLY FEELING IT,I KNOW WHERE YOUR GOING,BUT DIDNT FEEL THIS LINES
debate that you suck and you need more gay bosses;
if defeats are bats, i'll make sure ya get hit wit alot of losses;
OK
more tosses, kid we got 'proof your gay' so ya not novist;
kick ya gay ass to mississippi, cause i 'state' the obvious;
THIS WAS A NICE PUNCH,NOT TOO EFFECTIVE THOUGH
like only titty suckers, your close to a dick licker;
scar ya record so you'd think it was scratch n sniff sticker;
SORTA FUNNY,NOT HARD THOUGH
beat cha quicker and there is nothing you can say bra;
this cat cant be touched, an it's to bad the vets got to ya;
NOT LIKEING IT
this battle is like your head cuz i'm winning an it's swell;
took his last opponets verse, but this time he'll bite the L;
NOT TOO BAD,BUT REWORD THIS TYPE OF SHIT,IT WOULD OF CAME ALOT HARDER
This kids back is killin him, cuz i'm beatin him with his spine;
I'm playin hide n seek with ur brain, an you've lost ya mind;
NICE ENDING,COULD OF CAME A TAD HARDER,BUT THIS WAS NICE SHIT
MC4EYEZ::
No show? I've got a life, while you're just a worthless geek
Good think you posted early; I'd hate to think that took a week
OK OPENER,COOL SHIT HERE,DIDNT HIT TOO HARD BUT EFFECTIVE IN A SENCE
My punches have you like a crackhead, the way you take hits
Your name lies; I'm the Real-Eyez, you're just a fake bitch
NOW THIS I WAS FEELING AND LIKEING,IT HIT HARD GOOD SHIT
Little punk, probably running with a weak spineless crew...
Who couldn't go 3-0 if you were police minus two
I KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN HERE,BUT I DIDNT LIKE THIS,IT COULD OF BEEN REWORDED ALOT BETTER FOR A BETTER EFFECT
You only get to second base when your rub your own man tits
You're not an artist; you just think so as you're hitting the canvas
OK,NOT EFFECTIVE NOR HARD HITTING
Leave your eye blackened and swollen like you're winking; I'm sick
You only grasp the mic tightly because you think it's my dick
WEAK CONCEPT HERE,PRETTY MUCH PLAYED SHIT,NOT REALLY LIKEING IT EITHER
Veteran? Nah, you're just a bitch that I'm better than
My punches reach the Top Ten like I was David Letterman
BLAH AT THIS,FILLER TYPE SHIT HERE
Bitch, if you're number one, I need to be measured in decimals
You're such a pussy that your ass cheeks outnumber your testicles
THIS WAS FUNNY,BUT NOT REALLY HARD,BUT EFFECTIVE
I've got your spine jarred; so go home and learn how to rhyme hard
Your face is taking more punches than a workaholic's time card
NOT BAD
Realize can't hold a candle to me, so now I have to slap this cat
Telling me to match your bars...bitch, I can't rhyme as wack as that
AGAIN NOT BAD,WAS OK,NOT TOO HARD
Any rhymes I spit against you are nothing but a waste of rap
So I'll just knock your cheek bones out and watch your fuckin' face collapse
DECENT ENDING,I WAS FEELING IT,BUT IT WASNT HARD REASON WHY THE SETUP THREW THE PUNCH OFF,NOT LIKEING THE SETUP MUCH,BUT PUNCH WAS GOOD
UMM BOTH CAME GOOD,WHERE ONE EXCELLED THE OTHER FLAWED,WHICH WASNT ALL THE TIME,THIS IS KINDA OF A HARD BATTLE TO DECIDE CAUSE REALIZE CAME WITH SOME NICE PUNCHES AND SO DID MCEYEZ,I THINK IM GOING TO VOTE ON CONSISTANCY THOUGH,WHICH REALIZE WON ON AND HE GETS THE VOTE,MCEYEZ WAS CONSISTANT BUT NOT ALL THE TIME,SOME SHIT SEEMED A LITTLE FORCED AND RUSHED,BUT WAS OK SHIT,NOTHING TOO APPEALING EXCEPT THE 3LINES I LIKED,ALSO REALIZE CAME AS WELL AS GOOD,BUT KEPT THE SHIT CONSITANT,IT WASNT HARD TO FOLLOW MOST OF THE TIME
VOTE REALIZE
hm...im goin with realize...fo tha fact he had more flow...lemme recap on tha ending or "cap" flowz...
REALIZE "cap" flowz
see / me...nice rhyme...coulda done betta on tha line
react / draft...didnt like dat one really well
clever / reciever...ok line...no comment
drout / dish out...good rhyme...alright line
scholar / collar...good rhyme
sedate / hate...like tha sedate line...rhymed
bosses / losses...good rhyme
novist / obvious...coulda done betta on tha rhymin
licker / sticker...alright rhyme...wasnt feelin tha line
bra / ya...alright rhyme...not original
swell / L...nice on tha big L part...good rhyme
MC4EYEZ "cap" flowz
geek / week...nice line...good rhyme
hits / bitch...bad rhyme...menial line
crew / two...alright rhyme...nice line
tits / canvas...bad rhyme once again...nice punch tho
sick / dick...unoriginal rhyme...wasnt fellin tha line
betta than / Letterman...nice originality...my fav line
decimals / testicals...good rhyme...bad line
hard / card...alright rhyme...wasnt feelin tha line
cat / that...anotha unoriginal...alright line
rap / collapse...no rhyme...bad line
Eyez did have tha advantage with tighter hits...but he wasnt very fluent...this one has ta go to Realize...although a very very tight decision...
Vote = Realize
BOTH TIED IN VOTES SO BOTH WIN..RIDAH AND ILLDON DONT COUNT
REALIZE- 3-0
MC4EYEZ- 3-0
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