Good Battle Man
Yes indeed.
Eminem - Sing For The Moment
That's why we, sing for these kids who don't have a thing,
Except for a dream and a fucking rap magazine.
Who post pin-up pictures on they walls all day long,
Idolize they favorite rappers and know all they songs.
How the fuck can that line be bitten? Anybody can use that line....you can't bite it.....I used that line a long time ago....but you can't bite it if it's a clearly stated fact.....that line is a punch that can be used by anybody....if it's true....Originally posted by Shotta
oh and atheist this line looks bitten
How Will You Beat Me When You Can't Spell Your Name Right?
i herd sumthin just like it in the fabolous diss by ali vegas
Now for the verses.....
Atheist
Your Punches Are Just A Pure Landfill - Your Style Is Garbage,
Tekneik Is Marvel-Less When I Take Away His Childish Avatar!.....(Pretty weak and it didn't rhyme)
It Is Like Tyson Versus Lewis, You're Putting Up A Lame Fight,
How Will You Beat Me When You Can't Spell Your Name Right?"......(Second line was a good personal, but the Tyson/Lewis lines are played and it was weak)
Claim Tight? This Pussy Is Wide Open, Easy To Rip This Herb,
It's Obvious His Skill Is A Blank Expression Like His Signature.....The first one was aight but the second line was a pretty effective punch.
Eye Is Parted, Stab Vision In Snooker, Make You Drop Eye-Cue, (IQ)
How Will You Teach Me When You Couldn't Finish High School?....The Eye-Cue line could've been better, but it's OK
Your verse was aight......but packed a lot of played lines...
Tekneik
Ya raps make a boozers sound, you entered tha wrong forum because your LL stands for tha loosers lounge/....Better start than Atheist's verse
Atheist you fag is that your ladies layed out gown?, both ways ya styles getting less recognition then a played out clown/....This shit is extremely weak.....no points on that one
He spits a cold sellar type like freeze connection, spitting ill at him made him catch a yeast infection/
I win tha elite election, you thought I was spitting nasty and then you saw Atheists reflection/.....This was weak except that second half of the 2nd bar about his reflection
Resuming on our wack inspection and it was him who got caught, poppin your pimples is tha only time your blowing up tha spot/
This kids like a rooster because he’s always claiming a cock, pissing yourself in jail is tha only time your flows on lock/....This was boring as hell and weak...
This kids ignored, you could introduce any artist and still not talk-to-tha-band/
He claims he’s been getting oral sex, but makes his girl talk-to-tha-hand /....The verse was boring pretty much but this closer took the battle from Atheist to me....
Vote=Tekneik
Edited to fix vote.....
Tek came with harder punches overall, and that's what I look at most is the punches.
Resuming on our wack inspection and it was him who got caught, poppin your pimples is tha only time your blowing up tha spot/
This kids like a rooster because he’s always claiming a cock, pissing yourself in jail is tha only time your flows on lock/
^I liked that line the best
Vote-Tek
Peace
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[Po'Ethics][Written Voices]
kinnda close battle
punches - tek
multies - tie
wordplay - equal
flow - tek
tek came harder in this battle
vote - tek
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Next time I need to come harder, show my full skill. But when do the next match ups go up? I want to kill the next opponent, I'll have to actually try next time and not underestimate.
Eminem - Sing For The Moment
That's why we, sing for these kids who don't have a thing,
Except for a dream and a fucking rap magazine.
Who post pin-up pictures on they walls all day long,
Idolize they favorite rappers and know all they songs.
lol I underestimated you and dropped a wack verse
HmmmHmmm
UP FOR VOTES
TEKNEIK- 1-0
ATHEIST- 0-1