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  1. #1
    G.A.C
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    me freestyle please comment

    yo couldnt get a battle so i just gotta drop a few verses

    yo im a bad kid with good intentions when im ryming im like an inventor with good inventions,listen pay attention coz shit about to get deep im taking a leap from boy to man as of yet i have no plan, just gonna go with the flow and see where it takes me son my ryme book wheighs more than a ton,
    i got so many ideas and i have no fears so im stepping my game up hardest part about rappin is thinking a name up ,im setting the stage up for my arrival,
    haters in denial bout my lyrical skill but i dont care coz i know im good,
    got fans in the suburbs and fans in the hood , fans that are rubberd and fans that are nude,

    had no education so no job no job no cash so i had ta sell hash,
    dough is what i need refrigerator stocked with weed to keep it fresh
    everything i spit i always keep it fresh, keep a slugproof under my vest,
    im so sorry to anyone who i offend but talk but bad about me and its the end for you, i know wot to do when im in the booth spittin lines of the truth,
    any one who wanna abuse me or my position of power ill have to shower you with bullets have your mother at your grave laying down tullips,
    your flow is garbage mines insane two shots have doctors operating on your brain woah



    wot yall think




    here my links to my comments

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...13#post2229313
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...40#post2229340
    Last edited by G.A.C; March 29th, 2005 at 11:53 AM

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    off all the verse i liked the first one the most because it stood out the most and was more complexed and better.

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  3. #3
    G.A.C
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    thanks man i know i wasnt crazy with it or nutthin but i felt like spittin sum shit

  4. #4
    G.A.C
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    more thoughts please

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    It was aiight...
    Try settin it up so its easier to read, or else it gets borin'
    eg.

    xxxxxxxxxxxxaa
    xxxxxxxxxxxxaa
    xxxxxxxxxxxxbb
    xxxxxxxxxxxxbb
    xxxxxaaxxxxxaa
    xxxxxbbxxxxxbb

    or whateva man...
    Some aiight ideas
    Keep elevatin...

    ...oNe...

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

  7. #7
    G.A.C
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    yo i left 2 links on feedback i gave credz sorry bout that


    ne1 else like my freestyle?

  8. #8
    G.A.C
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    uppin

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    you gotta use slicker metaphors.

  10. #10
    G.A.C
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    ok i will

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    kanye2929
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    didnt quite get the flow myself but some nice lyric well done man.

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