First Beat I Ever Made

[Big Bones]

lol my first one ever lol

peep this shit (no title)

hifi
http://nic.dmusic.com/music/stream/hifi/11315

lofi
http://nic.dmusic.com/music/stream/lofi/11315

dont laugh to hard

[F-Money Bags]

LOL.....funny ass beat....LOL

[Big Bones]

thank you lol

i give props to all producers cuz this shit is hard yo

im best at rhymin

[INFORMATION]

alright bones........

since when did bigbones make beats...

remember that...........
i thought you was lyin and makin shit up
alright imma give you some pointers.........
and i aint gonna hurt ya fellings and get in ridiculous clown mode...
since it is ya first beat
the sounds aint too bad.........
its just when that piano comes in it overpowers everything else.....
and you have like no bass drum at all........
your beat acctually sounds like it would be an interlude or something.....
you used them frooty loop bubbles.........i love the bubbles...
it give like a timbaland type feel...knowhatimean
you just lack a dope drum pattern...
and if you had that...it wouldn't sound like an interlude...

if you havin trouble with shit like makin drum patterns and other shit hit me up on aim...
Nformation3@aol.com
if you wanna hear some of the illness...

http://soundclick.com/bands/information1

[Big Bones]

good shit dog, lol i liked the bubbles too but drum/bass i do need to hype it up but i aint no dr dre lol

ill hit u up, no doubt

[Big Bones]

hey i can always remix it to be better cuz i saved it
holla

[*UnFuckWithAbLe*]

bitch makin fun of me .. lmao .
it's iight .


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[Big Bones]

the fuck up lmao

[BLACK FLAME]

lmao rotflmao stick to rhyming or you need mad work man that beat was wack as hell no offense but i am telling the truth that shit was wack

[heated fiery]

fuck no .. no sympathy for no herb .. this shyt iz wack azz fuck

[Big Bones]

thanks lol

im not a producer lol

[iNFiNiTY^]

eh.. keep workin

[Big Bones]

^na man i did this for fun, imma stick to rappin, but like i sed i give props to yall producaz, this some hard shit to do