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    Emotions

    My emotions stir around my head
    Don’t know where to go from here
    Wandering around if I should just be dead
    But that is my biggest fear
    I hate the life I’m living in
    It’s just not fair
    Just feels like a recycling bin
    Rolling around the air
    Broken dreams follow my heart
    Makes me all confused
    Don’t know where to start
    Feeling like I’m just being abused
    Past hurting haunts me daily
    Leaves me fears and scars
    But when I think of Haley
    My world seems not afar
    I try to think of the positive things
    But when I do it hurts more and more
    Just makes me wanna cringe
    So I live it day by day waiting for what’s in store
    I lost the person I most loved today
    Oh god, please give me strength
    Don’t just take my life away
    Just help me find my fate
    So with all these feelings I have for now
    I hope I can find that other special someone
    Somewhere, somehow.

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    its good. but by the end it started to skim through it. mabey go a little deeper with the lyrics mabey

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