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    Micstro
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    Allow Me To Re-introduce Myself...

    Well, I've been gone for a while here. Name's Micstro, reppin Po'Ethics. Finally back... And if ya don't know who I am, allow me to re-introduce myself...

    Allow me to reintroduce myself to the plotlines
    Of existence
    You know that tiny little corner of the universe
    Where it seems like everything and everyone
    Revolves around the silly little happenings
    Of us
    That is if you can even remember “us”
    Before we became all serious and grown up
    And started masturbating to the sounds
    Of street poets and songbirds
    Who didn’t give a care for the organized chaos
    Of the world
    So they desperately sought new ways to stay on top
    Of Desolation Peak
    And force their lips to make love to the Buddha
    As if Zen were truly the endgame of Christianity
    As some would say
    So please tell me that you
    Remember us
    Back when we used to steal bubble gum wrappers
    From underage prostitutes
    And only put half of the money we were given
    By our parents
    In the collection plate
    And have food fights in fourth grade lunch rooms
    With the unpopular kids
    Who accepted the oddities of “us”
    Back when we were still trying to be like Turbo
    From “Beat Street”
    And go outside and break dance on top of
    Giant pieces of card board
    That we always found lingering somewhere alone
    Within the desolation of the street
    As street poets and songbirds
    Crowded the landscapes
    On their way toward poetic fame or a pop star life
    Gone wild
    Within life’s great hustle
    Never to be seen again
    So, I walked away from it all
    And you too
    Distant memory
    So, please allow me to reintroduce myself
    To both you and God
    Because the universe has yet to see
    The world premier of the real me
    Because I’ve yet to put down the looking glass
    And look into myself
    And see the real me



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    Micstro
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    Bumpiddy Bump Bump!

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    Micstro
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    Upx2

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    You're garbage. I can't believe you got into Po'Ethics.
    can I kick it?

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    I'm not feeling this at all, just doesn't come across as poetry. Very below par with what I have come to associate po-ethics with. You need to wok at it, all aspects...

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    Micstro
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    Ummm... well thanks for the honesty I guess... Sorry Spoken that you don't believe I should have been in the crew... And bounce what exactly didn't you like about it?

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    microcosm spokenoh's Avatar
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    Don't be so generic. If you want to be street poetic, talking about songbirds and sidewalk prophets, think of new perspectives. I have read this piece a million times before, it is all the same thing.
    can I kick it?

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    right.... i doubt they read the whole thing because this was far from generic. In the beginning i was like... ehhh this isn't the micstro i read before, but it got better , a lot better more near the end. A slow start but still good. How was this unpoetic I have to ask?
    Btw, micstro isnt this like the 3rd time youve returned? lol... its all good keep being original cuz this definately was if u actually read it and look past the word sidewalk prophets. Yeah, your usually refreshing but sometimes a lil too abstract, w/e lata

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    Micstro
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    Thanks Khan... Yeah its my 3rd time returning, Lol. Internet problems and such.. but I'm here to be active now. So things are lookin better... And spoken, I guess it goes by opinions ay? Thanks tho...

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