yeah... one more i guess....

[Swift Death]

Skip Go

signify the progress of time and see through the smog
each block laid before you, containting an answer
Look into my eyes and know i cant stand beside you
i break away, look at these clay hands...
...burned out by your sunshine
What is Evil?
Are you evil do you breath death?
step towards the dark and away from me
i see through each shell, contains the soul
you're breaking through the layers of greif
cold cut lust goes through the warm jackets
living for love and laughs who cares?
so listen to the music through headphones
give in to all that has consumed this world
and sit around the buzzing trauma of it all
Ill slit my wrist and write a letter in blood
realize that i am the one who has fallen
along with what you call a society...
so deamons withing release and feast
individually rapped for you're conveinces
cliing to a cross cause you're tired and lost
look back at the years you spent
think of what you have left
what will you acomplish?

skip go skip go

a ball of hate spins in all directions
infection eating clarity
look at the calamity of doubt
and hear the deamon music.

skip go skip

The trip of the foot...
face on cement
leaves blood and skin
bareing the skull

fall

[Swift Death]

n e one?

[obseqious]

well dude, it was good, honestly i think a lot of people 1 don't want to read somthing so long, or 2 are scared of whats around them, honestly, if this is a poem about your self, don't think anyone else doesn't think this way, i myself have thought and done these things, probably for the same reasons, but there is more to life than that, i hope you realize that-over all i liked the poem, it hade almost a realism to it that people don't want to acknowledge over all good job-keep writing.....OUT

[Swift Death]

meh...

[shawty"B"]

I like his. It was kind of interesting. You had some good imagery but it lacked at points. Your flow was fairly steady. And in all actuality i think that you could have elaborated more on this piece, it seems like theres something here missing from it, like you forgot to write one more thing..... But overall ti think that you did a good job on this peice, i enjoyed it for the most part. Good Job.


............fav part................

skip go skip go

a ball of hate spins in all directions
infection eating clarity
look at the calamity of doubt
and hear the deamon music.

skip go skip



keep droppin

Can you please reply to my poem
"Restless In My Sleep"



.....bless

~*UnO*~

[Swift Death]

meh...

[strange enigma]

I like it it sounds familar to my style thats prob why i favor it so much. It does feel like its laking a bit in areas

you're breaking through the layers of grief
cold cut lust goes through the warm jackets
living for love and laughs who cares?

I loved that part. The imagery was very gud it was very straight forward. it was very gud read in my opinio. keep writing.

[Swift Death]

i will

[Swift Death]

bubbler

[Swift Death]

up.

[Mantra]

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