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look at this kid wack thinks hes on a rapping mission
would need a sig big as the screen to get recognition.
wack kids punches unpredictable like the weather
but the difference is this kid hits weak whenever
this kids so fucking nervous he cant stop himself pissin
thinks hes on top of his game and its only the mirror hes dissin
kids thankful this is the internet otherwise he would choke
and the bit about u merc me i seriously hope that was a joke
gonna end this kids e-careers thats what i should
...........he wants to go 12 to kid himself hes good
sae , this no weight gravedigger dug himself a grave
tryin to brave but missed his landing like super dave
U should go into a cave, hide and neva come out
cause nobody feelin all that shit that u be talkin about
boy i don't have to shout i could drop wit a wisper
even at the tone of voice i would still dismiss ya
actin like u got flow when your shit's pre written
u couldn't be dirty if u was a newborn shitten
just a quick little drop to show u rookies how to do this
10 lines later niggas know i aint new to it
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look at this kid wack thinks hes on a rapping mission
would need a sig big as the screen to get recognition.
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wack kids punches unpredictable like the weather
but the difference is this kid hits weak whenever
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sae , this no weight gravedigger dug himself a grave
tryin to brave but missed his landing like super dave
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actin like u got flow when your shit's pre written
u couldn't be dirty if u was a newborn shitten
V/ This Battle Was Iight But Alot Of Punches Were Played Out Both Were Equal On Da Punches So Ma Vote Gose To Boss For Coming With Word Play And Multies
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aight nigga good shit uppin #2....................
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Gravedigger your shit was decent for a noweight these were my favorite lines from your verse
this kids so fucking nervous he cant stop himself pissin
thinks hes on top of his game and its only the mirror hes dissin
look at this kid wack thinks hes on a rapping mission
would need a sig big as the screen to get recognition
those were your best
bosshogg your verse was good these were my favorite lines
sae , this no weight gravedigger dug himself a grave
tryin to brave but missed his landing like super dave
U should go into a cave, hide and neva come out
cause nobody feelin all that shit that u be talkin about
actin like u got flow when your shit's pre written
u couldn't be dirty if u was a newborn shitten
Gravedigga-Your shit was decent it flowed good just some of your punches
wern't good just statements you only a couple of lines that were dope
your structure was good but you could of we worded some of your lines
but nice attempt at this good job
Bosshogg-your verse was also decent some of your punches sucked but the rest were all decent it flowed good i don't really like the structure though
but you had good wordplay yours also could of been worded better
but all in all it was a good verse
my vote gos to bosshogg for more punches
punches - boss
flow- tie
multiez - non
wordplay - non
personals - tie
overall >>>>>>>boss for comin a bit harder
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