aight....
14 lines...
3 votes to win... OR 2 K.O
1 round ...
DROP ASAP!!!!
ill go first as u have stated....
aight....
14 lines...
3 votes to win... OR 2 K.O
1 round ...
DROP ASAP!!!!
ill go first as u have stated....
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allright im just checking in ill drop in a sec. even if you havent yet gotta go do somethin real quick tho
Ok well here:
Is this a battle, honestly what are you trying to fulfill/
Are you attempting to diss me or just writing your will/
Every little line you spit or every little rhyme u drop/
Augments my rips leav’n u in dismembered flip flops /
Ya don’t wanna feud wit free.. I’ll chew ya like Fritos/
So don’t tread in the bear cage hold’n a bag of Doritos/
I’m this official site’s witch doctor, I’ll diagnose you with AIDS/
Don’t fuck wit da will, I’ll exterminate your microbe ass wit sum Raid/
Ur prolly reading dis with your jaw dropped dazed in a trance/
It’s sad that ya wanna grind wit me, cuz son u can’t dance/
I’ll enhance with the waltz, knock ya down with the rumba/
I wuld call and spit this shit to ya but you ain’t post’n ya numba/
And if you did why wuld I "call" in this or any instant/
Its clear that compared to me ur modest shit is "long distant"/
In gods world of rap... there waz a reason dis niga wasnt baptized/
cause he "Rips Off" styles... like they were the hair from waxed thighs//
leave em cross-eyed... FreeWilling?? pfftt... HEAT-him-up like 'Chile'/
close-to-fried.. cause when he-tried he flowed like, "free-willy"//
ask-me-really??... YEA.. his rhymes "feel-himself" like when he Master-Bates/
and im not tryin to HATE... but imma 'flatten-out' ur 'brain' so u could really THINK-STRAIGHT//
Its CHECKMATE... conisider a loss freely... like given pennies-to-needy/
ask me really??... yea NIGGAA... i be 'showing up' in ur HOME like DIRECT-T-V//
cause-im-killin-this SLUT.. good-thing.. I dont rip-u-up on stage/
fuck-u-up!!.. tie-u-up!!.. then slaughter u with my blades//
dont-play-games... ur 'no-weight' reverse the HEAT!!! betta ask u to get-on-ur-kneese/
cause I could spit~in~da~middle~of~JUNE and lyrically cause, the~season~to~FREEZE//
feel da breeze.. "WILL-U-FREE" ur WACKNESS in a blink~of~an~eye/
or 'think-twice' who u fuckin with when u HIT-SUBMIT-REPLY///
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aight...........
good battle...
votes??????? no dick-rydin... honesty
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yeah pretty good battle, we should start a crew or something
also vote on my other battle with 3unette
sure....
okay let me see that one...
the crew??.... w/e u wanna do man..
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im gonna say midnight won this battle............his wordplay was better.......even thou nether one of u had any really good punches.........frees shit about fritos and doritos sucked..........so im voting for midnight
aight.....
uppin for more votes????????????????
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In gods world of rap... there waz a reason dis niga wasnt baptized/
cause he "Rips Off" styles... like they were the hair from waxed thighs//
leave em cross-eyed... FreeWilling?? pfftt... HEAT-him-up like 'Chile'/
close-to-fried.. cause when he-tried he flowed like, "free-willy"//
ask-me-really??... YEA.. his rhymes "feel-himself" like when he Master-Bates/
and im not tryin to HATE... but imma 'flatten-out' ur 'brain' so u could really THINK-STRAIGHT//
Its CHECKMATE... conisider a loss freely... like given pennies-to-needy/
ask me really??... yea NIGGAA... i be 'showing up' in ur HOME like DIRECT-T-V//
cause-im-killin-this SLUT.. good-thing.. I dont rip-u-up on stage/
fuck-u-up!!.. tie-u-up!!.. then slaughter u with my blades//
dont-play-games... ur 'no-weight' reverse the HEAT!!! betta ask u to get-on-ur-kneese/
cause I could spit~in~da~middle~of~JUNE and lyrically cause, the~season~to~FREEZE//
feel da breeze.. "WILL-U-FREE" ur WACKNESS in a blink~of~an~eye/
or 'think-twice' who u fuckin with when u HIT-SUBMIT-REPLY///
wasnt feel n ya verse ya structure was off
and stop use n those lines at the End B cause
it makes the spit look sloppy but and ok verse
Is this a battle, honestly what are you trying to fulfill/
Are you attempting to diss me or just writing your will/
Every little line you spit or every little rhyme u drop/
Augments my rips leav’n u in dismembered flip flops /
Ya don’t wanna feud wit free.. I’ll chew ya like Fritos/
So don’t tread in the bear cage hold’n a bag of Doritos/
I’m this official site’s witch doctor, I’ll diagnose you with AIDS/
Don’t fuck wit da will, I’ll exterminate your microbe ass wit sum Raid/
Ur prolly reading dis with your jaw dropped dazed in a trance/
It’s sad that ya wanna grind wit me, cuz son u can’t dance/
I’ll enhance with the waltz, knock ya down with the rumba/
I wuld call and spit this shit to ya but you ain’t post’n ya numba/
And if you did why wuld I "call" in this or any instant/
Its clear that compared to me ur modest shit is "long distant"/
again wit the structure not feel n yoh structure yours was
a little better thats why hes get n my vote from structure
i dont have nothen else to go off this battle wasnt the best
Stay Still Herb
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Push n Herbs Aside
THE END IS NEAR FOR ALL
The Establishment
&
Lyrical KnockOut
RESPECT THOSE WHO RESPECT YOU
yeah uppping for more votes
I wish I had 100 posts to vote on other peoples battles
Thanks wiccid! uppin for more votes again
anyone have a crew I can join?
yea.... maybe we should start a new crew????????
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yeah midnite maybe we could lol I have no clue how to do it or anything but we can figure somethin out
lets ask sum people... im sure its not hard.. lol
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