This was somethin I wrote when I had just left school [a couple of days ago] and I decided to go at it like a poetic scripture but with the flow of a rap...It's pretty different so make of it what you will...
An era is to close…A dynasty I suppose,
Loads of lonely roads…Thrown, hit and missed blows,
On top of them all goes… A message for the weak-kneed,
The strong, the peaky…You must at least see,
A peaceful treaty…Mixed with blood-curling hate,
Thought at this certain rate…You’d hit a pearly gate,
Worrying traits…That make all signals direct wrongly,
Probably tempted…To make us a wrecked atrocity,
Audacity, deranged bravery…Will save thee,
Jewels for the tasty…Haters get slavery,
Crazy maybe…But you can’t fail to see the logic,
In discriminatin fools…Who annoy you just to frolic,
Like an alcoholic…When emotions get outta hand,
Everything sways wildly…Most fail to understand,
What the hell is goin on…Its disgusting like a pie of tripe,
But everyone gets drawn in…Yep, even the quiet type,
If we die tonight…We’ll die together with no fear,
That’s the constantly loyal…Yet almost stupid atmosphere,
It holds out…Throughout this community of youth,
Revisitin it…Can bring out the immunity in you,
Its truer then bein true… A Government among Kids,
Yet harder to open up…Then unbreakably sealed lids,
In the midst…You always see the energy, that ain’t hard…
This is why nothins creepier than an empty schoolyard…
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