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ima do this like this,
You suck dude, a newb, Ronny's never bin a killer
i asure you the only thing this mexican raps..
..is a fucking tortilla
come with some shit filler..you cant play this sport
ill call Ronny, Corbet..he fell way to short
K's dope on boards..i bet the janitors having a fit
cuase on the real R.M's just got real shit
and this bitch just got hit..word he shuda ducked
if its true that your sonic..
..am i tailes cuase you just got fucked?
sefl dustruct fool..you ent coo ill put you off your feet
looks like you clicked on soul theory's add..
..cuase you just got your beat.
uh word.
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im startin off a llljr battlin dis bitch nigga k
lets start dis up and get da easy niggaz out da way
just cuz u a mod and u elite dont make u no better
cuz yo name describes yo game and dats just 1 letter
nigga u aint no reel hardcore elite u just a imitater
i'll murder u so bad they'll fire u ass a moderater
im endin dis whole rap just cuz i gotta take a piss
cuz i realized u use da same raps from rv dat u use on dis
it's amazin 2 me how pancakez got up and runnin so fast
u could'nt start a reel crew so u got da mods in crew/hookups 2 help yo ass
i aint really gotta battle i will beat yo ass damn wit a small ass stick
cuz yo ass is only 24-1 cuz wack ass niggaz be ridin yo dick
Gonna break it Down
You suck dude, a newb, Ronny's never bin a killer
i asure you the only thing this mexican raps..
..is a fucking tortilla
____Nice Opener_____
come with some shit filler..you cant play this sport
ill call Ronny, Corbet..he fell way to short
___Lol, nice___
K's dope on boards..i bet the janitors having a fit
cuase on the real R.M's just got real shit
___okay___
and this bitch just got hit..word he shuda ducked
if its true that your sonic..
..am i tailes cuase you just got fucked?
__Eh__
sefl dustruct fool..you ent coo ill put you off your feet
looks like you clicked on soul theory's add..
..cuase you just got your beat.
___nice ender__
nice Verse.
vs.
im startin off a llljr battlin dis bitch nigga k
lets start dis up and get da easy niggaz out da way
_____no, man this is way to simple,____
just cuz u a mod and u elite dont make u no better
cuz yo name describes yo game and dats just 1 letter
___Nice___
nigga u aint no reel hardcore elite u just a imitater
i'll murder u so bad they'll fire u ass a moderater
__eh__
im endin dis whole rap just cuz i gotta take a piss
cuz i realized u use da same raps from rv dat u use on dis
___no__
it's amazin 2 me how pancakez got up and runnin so fast
u could'nt start a reel crew so u got da mods in crew/hookups 2 help yo ass
___no, enough with the Mod stuff__
i aint really gotta battle i will beat yo ass damn wit a small ass stick
cuz yo ass is only 24-1 cuz wack ass niggaz be ridin yo dick
____Played.___
eh verse, The 2nd Bar punch was real Dope. Other than that the rest was Eh.
v/k
Toe
2
Toe
K-not to bad of a verse thier. I think your punches connected bro but I know you could of wrote harder but good job .
Ron-Damn man I have seen way better from you man. I think you underestimated K. Some of your lines like I gotta take a piss and what not didnt do it for me.
V. K
Punches- tie
Personals- tie
Flow- tie
Creativity- K
Complexity- K
Aight, this battle was really even. I couldnt really pick who one when I compared the verses, but I am going to give it to K, strictly because of his last line. That was sick, and original, cuz i have never seen it before. Everything else was even, close battle.
Vote - K
You suck dude, a newb, Ronny's never bin a killer
i asure you the only thing this mexican raps..
..is a fucking tortilla
Dope
come with some shit filler..you cant play this sport
ill call Ronny, Corbet..he fell way to short
Ok
K's dope on boards..i bet the janitors having a fit
cuase on the real R.M's just got real shit
LOL Nice
and this bitch just got hit..word he shuda ducked
if its true that your sonic..
..am i tailes cuase you just got fucked?
Nah..tails helps sonic...no
sefl dustruct fool..you ent coo ill put you off your feet
looks like you clicked on soul theory's add..
..cuase you just got your beat.
Nice closer
vs.
im startin off a llljr battlin dis bitch nigga k
lets start dis up and get da easy niggaz out da way
Way too simple...decent
just cuz u a mod and u elite dont make u no better
cuz yo name describes yo game and dats just 1 letter
Ok
nigga u aint no reel hardcore elite u just a imitater
i'll murder u so bad they'll fire u ass a moderater
Decent
im endin dis whole rap just cuz i gotta take a piss
cuz i realized u use da same raps from rv dat u use on dis
If true...good personal punch
it's amazin 2 me how pancakez got up and runnin so fast
u could'nt start a reel crew so u got da mods in crew/hookups 2 help yo ass
Aiight...but stretched
i aint really gotta battle i will beat yo ass damn wit a small ass stick
cuz yo ass is only 24-1 cuz wack ass niggaz be ridin yo dick
Gay
v/K....good luck in LLL Jr. aiight K
Legendary Song - Winter Snow
this is pretty damn one sided..
K
You suck dude, a newb, Ronny's never bin a killer
i asure you the only thing this mexican raps..
..is a fucking tortilla
come with some shit filler..you cant play this sport
ill call Ronny, Corbet..he fell way to short
sefl dustruct fool..you ent coo ill put you off your feet
looks like you clicked on soul theory's add..
..cuase you just got your beat.
VS
Ronny
who had no punches whatsoever..pure statements and disses.
obviously K wins. pretty early but there's some good punches already
v.K
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K.
You suck dude, a newb, Ronny's never bin a killer
i asure you the only thing this mexican raps..
..is a fucking tortilla
This was a straight nameplay.
come with some shit filler..you cant play this sport
ill call Ronny, Corbet..he fell way to short
This was a decent nameplay.
K's dope on boards..i bet the janitors having a fit
cuase on the real R.M's just got real shit
Not feeling this one.
and this bitch just got hit..word he shuda ducked
if its true that your sonic..
..am i tailes cuase you just got fucked?
Not feeling this one either.
sefl dustruct fool..you ent coo ill put you off your feet
looks like you clicked on soul theory's add..
..cuase you just got your beat.
This punch was all right.
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Ronny Mexico.
im startin off a llljr battlin dis bitch nigga k
lets start dis up and get da easy niggaz out da way
This was just a statement, no punch.
just cuz u a mod and u elite dont make u no better
cuz yo name describes yo game and dats just 1 letter
All right attempt at a punch dude.
nigga u aint no reel hardcore elite u just a imitater
i'll murder u so bad they'll fire u ass a moderater
All right attempt at a personal.
im endin dis whole rap just cuz i gotta take a piss
cuz i realized u use da same raps from rv dat u use on dis
All right attempt at a personal.
it's amazin 2 me how pancakez got up and runnin so fast
u could'nt start a reel crew so u got da mods in crew/hookups 2 help yo ass
You need to be more creative with the personals.
i aint really gotta battle i will beat yo ass damn wit a small ass stick
cuz yo ass is only 24-1 cuz wack ass niggaz be ridin yo dick
This was just a statement. You gotta make your shit creative playboy.
Overall.
K you got your shit down. Keep doing you pimpin'. Ronny, work on throwing punches, creativity & wording. In this battle, I have K winning this. He had the three best bars of the match, and the more consistent/witty verse.
Vote.
K.
thanks.
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K-
You suck dude, a newb, Ronny's never bin a killer
i asure you the only thing this mexican raps..
..is a fucking tortilla
vs.
RM-
nothing
punches, flow and metas were all one sided, but this wasnt a great battle. lets see better from both yall next week.
vote- k
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The glass isn't half empty, it's one third full...
but I wouldn't drink that anyway, it's mostly backwash.
You suck dude, a newb, Ronny's never bin a killer
i asure you the only thing this mexican raps..
..is a fucking tortilla
come with some shit filler..you cant play this sport
ill call Ronny, Corbet..he fell way to short
the rest where played.
vs.
nothing.
the rv line could have been worded, and would have been funny as hell.
vote/k.
not your best verse tho.
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