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Thread: Deep Thought..im going for BEST VERSE of 2005

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    Deep Thought..im going for BEST VERSE of 2005

    i got fucking tumors in tumors look at the weather
    my brain storms rumors and rumors the sooner the better
    an entire school raged and caged in a cafeteria
    where infested food plagues the eggs with bacteria
    what makes-me-act like a fucking maniac? im a brainiac
    with a brain mainly trapped inside a cranium cracked hit by a titanium bat
    so the truth is my brain is weak and for days im creeped
    by a gang that beats,--- me--- up so hard im afraid to sleep
    with a fist like stainless steel i was raised and trained to kill
    i slang pills to pay the bills that pretty much explains my skill
    if you're near me be cautious if you fear me you're clearly a novice
    the rules are simple and obvious the bullets will hit you the hardest
    im a chiropractor that rides a tractor over ur back so it pops like firecrackers
    creating quakes that nearly breaks seismographers attatched with nitro
    blasters fuck im a psycho rapper...

    me die? god..i pray i do,,, since every fucking second of my life is deja-vu
    yes i hate you too i wana fucking choke you till your face turns blue
    do you feel the rhymes and tension? sniff the fucking lines and sense them
    place ya mind in a space time demension embrace the mother fucking taste
    of einstiens convention where numbers run like a matrix and combine a sentence ...impossible?

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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...55#post2757055

    link one...sorry but can i post one link at just for upping?

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    This sucked.

    Period
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    of course you are going to say that.

    since all i told you in your verse titled "you never been layed" or w/e your strongest lines and your weakest lines and u talk shit to me u fuckin newb all your posts dont make you good in reality...you suck. so stop posting in my thread kid

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    As I said in a previous thread, if you really think that...

    Battle me...

    If you lose, i reserve the right to delete you.
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    I thought it was good with the ryme part...It sounded alot like an old crazy Eminem drug song shit...Really it wasnt deep or all that but rymed good...The rymes were nice and I liked the multies u put in there...The line the best was the titanium bat one...and the one with the afraid to sleep line...GJ on the wordplay but u could make it a little deeper than pills and skills...8/10

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    i want more feed back =\ good or bad i really dont care just tell me what i need to work on

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    You need to leave better feedback, closed.
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