RIP m8

[lethal technique]

u eva lost sum1 that it hurt so bad,
ud of been glad to have been lyin on that wood, instead of your boi who helped u live through out the hood,
youd do nethin just to make another day, or have lost him a diffrent way,
but still they say, that the good die young, so you must have been a good one to be taken from us so early to your grave,
but now that your in heaven i no ur gonna see, a way of propa decency n lead me to the guy who has made all this crew so sad.
this aint just a piece of shit goin out to my boi, but for all you who eva lost sum1 you loved or cared bout, this could be your chance to send out your shout.


RIP

(1st rhym eva)

[Visual-X]

Hey man i understould what u were saying to and i felt it
but didnt have rythm or flow just sounded like a speech that
would be given at a funeral but man just work on the rhyming
and the flow, i c u used your multis but pick up the vocab a little

peace man hit mine up

keep writing

[Tha Reason]

u eva lost sum1 that it hurt so bad,
ud of been glad to have been lyin on that wood, instead of your boi who helped u live through out the hood,
youd do nethin just to make another day, or have lost him a diffrent way,
but still they say, that the good die young, so you must have been a good one to be taken from us so early to your grave,
but now that your in heaven i no ur gonna see, a way of propa decency n lead me to the guy who has made all this crew so sad.
this aint just a piece of shit goin out to my boi, but for all you who eva lost sum1 you loved or cared bout, this could be your chance to send out your shout.


RIP

(1st rhym eva)

I could Tell

IT was still good do

CHeck mine out

[lethal technique]

hey. thnx guys, ill try n get the rhyme n flow figured n hopefully ill b back betta than eva.

[TruTh C]

i was feelin' the topic...but you should try to rhyme more..and work on the flow..if you stay wit the good topics and have a good flow then you'll be a ace rapper soon iight

[stacks5]

u wack ass nigga ill show u wat im bout ncum threw ya crib pull da burna rite out cause u no my bullets like bleach stains they dont come out