do i got skillz? im kinda new

[WhIte ChoclAte]

ok um sorta new at this and im white so heres a little freestyle... tell me what you think on a scale of 1-10

i may be white but i can win a fight.
ill woop yo ass easy as riding a dyke
dis fool aint no rappa ill beat him on the fucking tolite while takeing a crapa
man if you insult me ill blow out yo brains 7,8 holes in ya head dosent matta its tha same
so if you dont like what im spitten battle againest me ill beat you while im shitten!
so man i wouldent be dissen what im spitten!
so thats kinda bad ill whoop yo ass find yo house go inside crack ya spine blow ya head off wit ma nyne HOLLA

im out

[Quest.]

ok um sorta new at this and im white so heres a little freestyle... tell me what you think on a scale of 1-10

i may be white but i can win a fight.
ill woop you as easy as flyin a kite.
dis fool aint no rappa ill beat him on the fucking tolite while takeing a crapa
man if you insult me ill blow out yo brains 7,8 holes in ya head dosent matta its tha same
so if you dont like what im spitten battle againest me ill beat you while im shitten!
so shut the fuck up you motha fuckin bitches!

im out

Elevate..alot

[Duval]

umm...............Elevate everything
Structure
Flow
Vocab
Wordplay
You are too simple
YOu need to elevate everything
Umm...hit the link in the sig and leave feedback
PM me if you want help.

[wyte boy]

its a 2 cause the sentences were short, vocab work on that for real "fite, kite" but keep writing and working on ur shit and ul get beta.....

[Legacy01]

yea, ima agree wif everythin above ^ ^ ^.... i cant really rate ya shit... was really basic... but keep it up n i swear ya gona get better k, im out

[Cody Nash]

holy shit...uhhh no...im just gonna be a lil more honest than these fools...don't rap...it was bad...no rhyme, flow, structure, punches, everything you could list...umm no...thought u had something going on toilet line but then it literally went down the crappa......