Drama

[Spoken]

hahaha

mic check listen


here in the open mic ima use as my try-outs
for any crew who want me,ill casted no doubt
subliminal thoughts rippin styles terrific
no need no introduction bitchez to be specific
lyrically ill,lyrically an assasin
nigga ill slash ya ass call me the captain
breakin MC's and chokin them out
crush there vocal cords,wont hear them sream or shout...
hahaha.....man u funny u fukin humpty dumpty
nigga you just mad cuz you just ugly
so dont hate on a nigga cuz he be so fly
so my nigga i dont go for guy's..hahaha
flowin non stop shit i be spiitin acopella
lyrics be too hot for beatz,flow more betta
i hold ya ass for ransom nigga then i cash em
elevate them high off they feet and attck em
snap back with a flurry, shit verbally snatchin em
flippin they heads,point blank range they bodies i sack em

[sILLable]

kinda simple....you need a topic..then you need to stick to it...and an acceptance piece for crews shouldnt be in here really...but i dont think it matters that much....elevate your vocab..and your wordplay..your rhyme scheme...and incorporate some complexity..keep elevatin.~1~