due netime today.
10 bars (20 lines)
blind spit. Good Luck.
This Is My Check In.
due netime today.
10 bars (20 lines)
blind spit. Good Luck.
This Is My Check In.
Aight Checkin In , Go 1st.good Luck....................
please vote on this battle..uppin..
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chino fans peep.
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Ayo….Look....aight this is wassup.
Louis n’-Clark couldn’t help this-fart get on the shoppin-cart
God showed u the north star but you looked south at fucken-retards
You’ve been here forever and you still haven’t gone audio?
Your like N’SYNC lip-syncin cuz u can’t rap a 2 sense a-flow
Like my girl friend spendin 2 years tryin to pick a-pair-of-sneakers
Can’t decide wdf she’s doing making me wanna-tear-out-her-hairs
Last time we rapped, I told u to double excel, tryin to help-your-self
But obviously your self esteem’s on the level of 50 Cent’s record-sales
To me, your raps are older than fucken sluts riding prep’s penises
But like elders, they think they’re so wise, they’re never believin-it
Meh once u was-a-vet, but like too many drugs ur spinal chord-broke
And its just impossible-to-fix, like finding a fucking smart blond-spoke
OMG get a fucken job, get fucken lost, your fucken dream-is-at-it-seems
It’s a dream u dumb fuck, u had ur spot, now ur speed-is-outta-steam
I asked a surgeon-the-meaning-of-this-QUOTE-on-QUOTE-rapper-spittin-this
“He’s cursed,-son,-meaning-not-shit, Folk-is-broke, sad-that-he’s-not-getting-it”
Your gossip, fuck it n’ sha-ddup cuz no one gives a-fuck bout your bad-luck
I sure don’t give a-fuck, n if I eva said I gave a-fuck, I still would’t give a-fuck
Now just like I said the day I saw Christina Aguilera singing-and-shaking-ass
Go be grown up, accept ur a failure, n fuck ur bling-bling-and-rapping-crap
ill end ya rappin days real quick ,/
have you evacuatin like jews in tha gaza strip.//
please , you left and came back,/
i read half way through you pre written verse and i still laugh//
im the master of this battle institute ,/
you like a hostage to the nazis ill, jus put you against the wall and shoot//
im what you get when you fire nukes at an astroid a large collision,/
manifest into more parts and head into your fuckin direction.//
im like the conqueor genghis khan , /
destroy your ego and have it off with your teenage mom//
cuz you still juvenile ,/
im wastin you like you was tax on the michela jackson trial//
fuck battlin dawg put the mic down,/
im like the sherif of battlin cuz in run you out town//
im more poisonous than ricin tablet,/
you die slow of a cold , like when ya pops found out ya turned fagget//
you rhymes be wack and you be probably be watchin the battle contest on mtv,/
the only source of hip hop you have are those downloaded eminem cds//
theres crucial times som im gonna settle the,/
kepp pushin you back as if you were that album chino xls poison pen.//
please vote on this battle..uppin..
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chino fans peep.
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pal murked this dude real bad.......he had nice punches and they were current like the one bout the gaza strip......also i liked the tax-MJ line......and overall u came alot better...............while crucial streched his lines and put too much emphasis on multis and not enuff on punches....
so V/PALXL
hit up my open links in the sig
my vote goes to PAL XL basicly cuz his wordplay was freasher
and i just enjoyed it alot more plus his punches were all around hotter
vote : PAL XL
HOLY SHIIIIT AT THIS D/R VOTES!!!!
opener-c
ender-p
middle-c
punches-c
flow-p
flow transistion-p
vocabulary-c
vote=crucial ............pax that was a noob verse right there
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Made By Me
crucial-nice opener man but your ender needs improvement.....your middle was tight also.......punches were really workin with you they hit.......disses were straight.......you flow wasnt feelin it need to improve on that ..........you vocabulary was good ........your mutlies is what really made your verse welll......the complexicty went up cuz of your multies
pax-i aint sure how kmany d/r fireds you got but crucial defiantly won this.........your opener and middle were not that good.....your ender was decent......your flow and flow transition was better becuase of how simple this verse was.......your vocabulary defiantly nees improvement
i had to add more explanation to this becuase i forgot the other way was banned......so my vote goes to crucial
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Made By Me
Upping #1. and plz people notice the rhymes in the middle as well.i don't wanna hear the shit bout stretched lines. that doesn't mean nothing in real rap. by the way PAL XL. nice job. i see u still got it. aight. lets keep the votes coming.
ill hit up this battle if u hit up one of my battles
dude. don't do that. thats like saying "if you vote for me...I'll vote for you" just vote on the battle. and leave a link. don't do this stupid shit. u'll only get banned.Originally Posted by DoRcHeStErRiDeR
Uppin #2.
the freestyler guy won he had some good punch lines
freestyle hears a rap for u rap rap rap ii gottsa go
did u like my rap if u did battle me u set it up k.
o i dno how to challenge peeps so ur gonna hafta challenge me
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