WHat Hip-Hop is to me

[Killa_Scrilla]

To me Hip-Hop is much more than music/
Such a unique thing there is no way to fuse it/
There are four elements and no matter how I choose it/
It's like a part of me and i never want to lose it/
I use it to express my feelings and abilities/
And express creativity in any form it may be/
From emceeing to bboying and sometimes even graffiti/
If I'm hurt deep inside hip-hop seems to be healing me/
It helps me get away from the world and the trouble/
Helps me along life wherever I may struggle/
Something to pick me up whenever i may tumble/
Without hip-hop my life would be all dust and rubble/

rate plz :yes: :yes: :yes:

[mcl]

yo man thats how i feel anyway the rhymes in this piece were good the structure fit them toghter

[Cody Nash]

Shit...enough said

[Legacy01]

yeah, the structure was ok...but nothing special in here, you've expressed how your feeling... but lyrically, it wasnt that great and u dont need to end every line with this " / " shit...coz we get the words that rhyme, but story line was aiight..keep elevatin

[CrazyCarl]

Seen this topic a lot, you need creativity to make it stand out when its been done before. This was basic. Something positive is that it was personal. Keep working on getting emotion across, but move onto more complex topics.

[*BaByShAnTe*]

then flow was good though
had a nice topic as well.
just try to make it more interesting next time, not to original. it wast bad just needed more work on it like vocab and more details