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    babbling brag~art

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...23#post3292123
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    BABELING BRAG~ART BY AGHZ BAK WERDZ
    I slice your vocal chords,
    With whorls of lines that define you loosing the war
    Then have you eaten by the lyrical carnivores, metaphors,
    If I diss, take in stride, regardless of vibe
    As far as lyrics I’m lesbian cause I aint just getting bye. (Bi)
    I put in the time to recite rhymes
    Rewrite lines, type hymns, till my jaw and tongue misaligns.
    Your career will end by contract..
    Cause most of you will re~sign
    And forfeit before colliding with mine.
    Nigguz say they aint in it for shine, But continuously polish the cock
    Playing for the wrong team and sport,
    It’s like all they know is jocks.
    So I’m quick to mach an emcee
    Those who listen and read will spot and see
    All I do is state the facts in my battle raps
    Then rip want to bees at mach speeds.
    Physically and typically I got greed to feed.
    So I’ll eat you lyrically after I put you on the menu
    Regardless of venue this is how I handle it when rents do,
    Once I sign the check there’s proof I paid dues.
    Werdz got a short fuse, dipped in gasoline and ignited
    So prepare to lose. I don’t need to be inedited
    For cramping your style and forcing you to use
    Midol and Icy hot patches with Vaseline inside it.
    Raps got me annoyed, leaving me in a void I can’t avoid
    My death would just elevate your only success
    Like Biggie and Bad boy.
    But till then, I ain’t finished till I decide I had enough
    Till I incinerate these no talent bluffs acting tough
    By spitting flames Cause like Diddy turning gay,
    They going up in a Puff (uh huh uh huh take that)
    I won’t sweat it, fuck a record deal
    With so many doing what I do
    I appraise my every phrase to show I’m real.
    So it’s mandatory that I appeal and if JLO’S ass is worth a mill
    Then these words is worth a couple thousand
    And I’m looking for someone to pay the bill.
    It’s all good though.
    If there’s no doe Ill still flip flows,
    And turn every rapper who spit whack consistently to industry ho’s
    Then pimp the game.
    Oh… in case you aint know.
    The only reason people ask why the fuck you aint blow
    Is cause suck! Your lip line looks like Lil Mo’s.

    this looks a little different from how its spit and originally written but you get the idea......
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Lol i liked this piece you know my style so you know i enjoy creating punches and metaphors but i love reading other peoples you had some nice punches in this. The Biggie line, The lesbian line, The diidy line, they were all tight made me laugh which is always good when you read an Om instead of thinking how shit it is. Your vocab was good for this type of piece you didnt need to go overboard with it and you didnt. The imagery was good and descriptive it has to be to make sure the punches hit hard. The flow was ok but thats the only thing i could criticise about the piece, i think it would of been tighter with a couple of multies in there it would of made it slightly more complex.
    Return the feed on my new Om:
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    yeah this piece had me laughin yo i like it son, but i wanna see u make a more serious piece aight man but good shit im lookin forward to seein more of ur drop aight

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    word son this was funny as hell. But u had a few good punches i was tight homey

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    Quote Originally Posted by SkullBreaker
    yeah this piece had me laughin yo i like it son, but i wanna see u make a more serious piece aight man but good shit im lookin forward to seein more of ur drop aight
    WORD PEEP THE LINKS IN MY SIGS THERE SOME REAL SHIT THERE AS WELL AS BATTLE STYLE RHYMES
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Quote Originally Posted by warchild
    Lol i liked this piece you know my style so you know i enjoy creating punches and metaphors but i love reading other peoples you had some nice punches in this. The Biggie line, The lesbian line, The diidy line, they were all tight made me laugh which is always good when you read an Om instead of thinking how shit it is. Your vocab was good for this type of piece you didnt need to go overboard with it and you didnt. The imagery was good and descriptive it has to be to make sure the punches hit hard. The flow was ok but thats the only thing i could criticise about the piece, i think it would of been tighter with a couple of multies in there it would of made it slightly more complex.
    Return the feed on my new Om:
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=240126
    Word^^^^^^^^^^^

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    thanks for the love twin
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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