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    I'd take your cancer away, replacing your chest with my lungs
    I'll take your sorrows away when you depressed in a slump
    I'll catch your tears on a leaf as if i was a rain forest
    Just to say thank you for all the years you took the pain for me
    I'll make you laugh when your no longer happy anymore
    I'll let you sleep on the couch as I rest happily on the floor
    I'll be loyal even when the clouds are gray and the air is fog
    So if you want to act goofy, I wont be embarassed at all
    If you feel tired of life, i'll stop and lay out a mat
    Just know i'll be loyal this day, and still loyal the day after that

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    straight but you could of been more creative....................can you leave feedback on my poem's

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