GOD DAMNIT REAL MOTHERFUCKEN FEED.....criticism c'mon
GOD DAMNIT REAL MOTHERFUCKEN FEED.....criticism c'mon
can I get some constructive criticism here???
i thought was hot and mad thoughful I loved the emotion towards the end I found myself repeating it in my head after reading it
... the middle was a shaky but you pulled it out much love
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=245810
...........feed= doesnt equal comments my newbs that no nothing of oms......can a real nigga throw me some criticism here???
it was cool homie
i felt the the topic
the vocab was cool
the flow was Ok
i give it a 8/10
^last person to rate anotha verse
Civil War on tha run! Blastin deady liars//
Me,General Grant, your stonewall ass gets blown by FRIENDLY FIRE//
fuck you crazt
^LOL!
Damn dawg, you just pullin the disses tonight, huh? Gotta lil' pac in ya, huh?
lol!!!!!!!!! my 4 year old brother will merk ya ass! I should leave it to him!
Civil War on tha run! Blastin deady liars//
Me,General Grant, your stonewall ass gets blown by FRIENDLY FIRE//
......honestly I saw both yall's shit and looks like to me Zone wuld merk your ass crazy.....take this motherfucker outta here....
(Some good feed plz????)
Mutha fucka your another phony.
Dawg, your verse was weaker than Zone's! And he is Dr.Seuss!
Civil War on tha run! Blastin deady liars//
Me,General Grant, your stonewall ass gets blown by FRIENDLY FIRE//
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