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    Thru the Vent



    I could play-words, but most of u would brush it off with “that’s ok” slurs,
    I’d build a verse, -intricate, & u’d miss the multies as I flow n spray verbs
    I should get metaphoric, add lexis, its too deep u don’t sweat esoteric
    I’d hold a pen philosophic, make quote & shape a plot darker than gothic
    I: legit amongst the last of the scribes; images vivid are cast with the vibes
    I’d edit grafts to the sides, epic movie motions moving fast with the slides
    I gambit take risks to invent, as I vent mild anger pent-up within content
    I’d admit to all that I meant, am intent wild intense solid as fucking cement
    I express crazy thought via the verse, 3 gulps of air n I’m higher than birds
    I’d suggest you hire a hearse, fit a coffin to your size before trying ur worst
    I profess: warrior blood floods my veins, pale-horse rider hands on reins
    I’d confess to all kinds of ills n shames, paint pictures so can feel them pains

    Expressing the inner true lament
    Letting steam rise thru the vent
    I would tell you whats up next
    But rest of the scriopt is too complex




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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=245789
    Last edited by WordPloy; November 2nd, 2005 at 09:12 AM

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    uhm?
    no upz

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