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    Mc-trinity
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    Life limit's

    [Verse 1]
    A life distorted, meant to be eroded and contorted with the rest that were Consorted
    Not concerned, a withered wanderer ready to be adjourned
    As February approaches, ready to be reminisced by hoaxes
    For he is either blind like Stevie Wonder or mixed by blunder
    Cause he was born to serve with Black History on a month that remnants black misery
    Such as MLK and Malcolm X, ready to soar with Eagles but this Falcons Hexed
    Into a nuance of 86 years filled with jagged tears, being abandoned- he fears
    Or sold for profits like the red sox did in the diamond office
    He can’t drop it, for being exposed to what the rivalry’s propose that he opposed
    Similar to Bambino’s Curse, No decision could be worse than the option to be mounded first
    It’s like being offered immortality, one that should have been a Makaveli formality
    To say not, is lunacy, this is a once in a lifetime opportunity
    But he’s blowing it…

    [Chorus]
    Fade away with the days,
    For you will get older,
    But bolder, to survive a life that gets colder,
    Either regret that you didn’t live with it,
    Or fuck the limits and take this minute
    To travel beyond life’s pivot…

    [Verse 2]
    Eye’s wide with vision, his minds fission, this is his only ambition
    Face pale, a bewildered reaction he exhales, cause if he fails,
    There will be no meaning in life, he’s forced to strife
    Cause this aint a movie waiting for an encore, this is his only time to conquer
    The instinct to not blow it arrives and is incentive for the moment
    He’s amplified with hype and conations, he’s living the passion by surrendering sedation
    His lyrics levitate in a mind state where his Solomon spirits meditate
    Forced to divagate from the Yellow Brick Road, They underestimated his loath
    He’s a verbalizing panther, Like Paul Revere, he don’t need a Lantern
    He conquers what the ride shines, Traveling city to city with his own guidelines
    A Celtic that’s globetrotting, there’s no stopping, lyrics that got dopes flopping
    It’s no Mystery, this patriot is ready for victory to sweeten his life like Hickory
    And live in the fast lane, but he just cant get past pain
    It’s another roadblock he suffers from…

    [Chorus]
    Fade away with the days,
    For you will get older,
    But bolder, to survive a life that gets colder,
    Either regret that you didn’t live with it,
    Or fuck the limits and take this minute
    To travel beyond life’s pivot…

    [Verse 3]
    His minds at work, but its Sunday, he’s at church and in search
    For redemption upon this atheist that deserves suspension, but he’s paying his pension
    With his hands tight like pliers around the book of god, as he preaches to the choir
    But debris sends his entity back to reality that forces his finale
    Cause his pace’s set at largo, the audience is ready to cook ‘em like escargot
    But this anarchist embargo’s for his soul to be another label’s cargo
    And be a shipment to the booth, when he speaks only truth, he doesn’t want no coupe
    He’d rather drive a ford escort and have his voice export than be another import
    That puts Boston on the map as the new capital that can rap
    And put the star next to Cambridge, where the new roadblocks do him no damage,
    Still life’s passenger, but only the oracle knows he beholds the next massacre,
    He just has to verbalize the plot, for this bullet is all he’s got,
    And his only shot, is to be heard worldwide

  2. #2
    Mc-trinity
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    I got bored so i wrote another one just now, any advice peepz

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    Mc-trinity
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    any advice

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    For fuck sake, leave 2 links.

    Its where you go into a thread, post a decent amount of feedback on that persons OM, and leave the link to the peice you posted on in this thread.

    Then, you go do it AGAIN.

    Thats where you have 2 links.
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    Last edited by Mc-trinity; November 2nd, 2005 at 09:43 PM

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    Notice how i mentioned DECENT feedback.. God. I wouldnt even be here doing this if i wasnt pissed off about how people like you steal good quality criticism off people like me.
    PE|WV

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    Mc-trinity
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    I tried..........eh wat could i say,i dont rap about those stufff

  8. #8
    Mc-trinity
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    any advice on ma thing

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    any
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    sucky strucutre.....elevate on it..dont make the lines have so many sylalbles..it fucks up the flow....flow was not good as well....rhymes were aiight....topic was aiight....this drop was aiight...js aliight......jus keep elevating..you got potential..jus elevate..peace

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    okai thx

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    Closed. Read the rules next time.

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