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    since u left

    only had bout 7 min to make this up kinda like a extended freestyle so dont think this is my best work

    never had nobody like u who wants me
    ya skin ya eyes ya touch it haunts me
    wasnt sure how to love till i met u
    i wish i had money so anythin u wanted i could get u
    im sorry i lost it sorry bout the fight
    i just cant go on wit out u in my life
    when im not wit u i feel stress
    wit out u i feel like i got nothin left
    its so hypnotizin the way u move
    when i earnd that 20 dollers i let u choose
    anythin u wanted but sadly had to give u a price range
    when im wit u i get this feelin call it strange
    when u left i only felt pain
    wit out u girl my life aint the same
    now its like im travelin down one dark pit
    life wit out u courtney it aint worth shit
    i didnt mean to call u a bitch didnt mean to offend
    i wonder could u ever love me again
    u truly were my one and only
    my boys got my bak but im still feelin so lonley
    do u remember the way i used to hold u in the night
    bangers outside the door but i made sure it was goin be alright
    i wish u could love me again but it seems our realtionship is thru
    so now im here rappin reminissin on u
    if i could i would by u the world
    cant stop thinkin how much i love this girl
    and no one could replace u, the things u shown to me
    so courtney im beggin u come home to me
    i love u....

    remember didnt have a lot of time fo this one

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    uppn fo feed

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    strucutre was off and same with flow..but rhymes were good
    this was an aiight drop...elevate on complexitt
    same with vocab...you got potential.....
    keep droppin and keep elevating
    vocab was too simple but like i said..
    rhymes were good..impressed with that
    overall this was like an ok...peace

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