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    "I Speak of Revolution" - Absinthe

    Little preface. I'm writing an album that is a full story all the way through. You've heard of a rock opera, this is a rap opera. This is the story of the main character meeting the love interest. The Main character is Philosophy C, head of the Love Revolution. In the future, love will be manufactured by the government- and is very fake, and the only real place love exists is in these hidden underground caverns, created by the Revolutionaries. Here you are.

    Beneath the stage is a ragin' fire,
    Underneath the ground, red desire.
    Its the heat that keeps me discreet,
    Because I'm just too hot.
    And if you think I'm not. (You're wrong)
    If you still disagree (So long)
    I'm not about to sit and debate,
    Not gonna procrastinate,
    And at a later date, I'll show you
    I'm everything you want-
    And a little bit more!
    So instead of this session
    Of argue and digression,
    I imagine the repression
    Of your feelings, is messin'
    Up your affinity for leasure,
    It would be my greatest pleasure
    And without desperature measures
    To see you smile, and after awhile...
    I'll reveal the reason I'm so versatile.
    So, little darlin', watch these eyes
    And I'll surmise, why the wealthy and wise-
    Lead the rise of chivalric demise.
    No more knights in shining, are more
    Than flights in black, stealth armor.

    Displeased that this thing called love,
    Is something lovers have been bereft of,
    Passion in the soul, only a hole,
    measured by calendar rhythmatic birth control...
    We are livin' in a controlled world, a non life-
    The Matrix wasn't far off, live under the knife.
    The scrutiny of omnipotent governments,
    But love lives under glass in various tints
    A rose coloured hue, to fool me and you,
    But real love was lost a little after Bobby Frost,
    But baby, lucky for you, you ran into the general
    Head of the cause, Philosophy "you know Who"
    I lead the love Revolution, Viva La!
    Now that you know, Hear me Now!
    Love doesn't exist in your bars and taverns
    The act exists in underground caverns,
    I wear this patch and this beret
    An homage to an old fella named Che-
    And now that you know, we better go.
    Agents of evil, watchin' me from corners fo',
    That's what we get for lovin, hon
    Always on the go, always on the run.
    So hold on tight, look below and -
    You'll see that red light,
    Beneath the stage is a ragin' fire,
    Underneath the ground is red desire.
    Trap door. 1, 2, 3.
    Disappear.



    Lynx.
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...37#post3603737
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    that was a nice peice very different from what every one else is doin so keep at it

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    Uppin...

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    flow was ight, concept wus gud i dunno if it wud be a rap opera
    more on a poetic tip, was ight...kinda coo...definit potential...
    ya skillz is srtait, stay up, peace

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    Yeah, thanks man. Cool. Got somethin else to ask, where do you think the story goes from here?

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    this was....................

    str8 flow, concept was on the tracc. but did'nt understand the concept. very simple.........2/10

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    Cool and all, but 2/10? Was the concept really that vague? I explained it above the actual drop. Maybe if you could tell me what made you confused- but that feed message was wack dude.

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