The Hidden Diaries:Demonic Seeds

[P. Mortuus]

Thanks, yea i usually say out my rhymes tupac/nas style, not to fast see

[P. Mortuus]

Thanks for all the feed and upppin'

[~MVL~]

yeah this shit was madd dope, i was feelin alot of your structure and wordplay, you had some strong vocabulary and you made it seem like you on that devil shit mayne, you killed alot with stringin your sentances together, if i was to give it a rating it would be like 9.9/10 so verry close to perfection, keep workin at it this was a great peace and should be read for a long time

[P. Mortuus]

yeah this shit was madd dope, i was feelin alot of your structure and wordplay, you had some strong vocabulary and you made it seem like you on that devil shit mayne, you killed alot with stringin your sentances together, if i was to give it a rating it would be like 9.9/10 so verry close to perfection, keep workin at it this was a great peace and should be read for a long time

Lol, nah i aint a satanist dog......Thanks for the preciation

[Black_Bandana]

Nice topical/story lol.

It had good rhymes,nice flow,nice vocab,good structure,and you got the point of the subject.Nice drop.

I'd have to say bout a 9/10

[P. Mortuus]

Thanks dog, preciate it

[Black Hornet]

this was an overall good piece. i like the imagry and how you flow.
you got good vocab and damn good concepts. you show good understanding and are more knowledgable than i thought. well done.

[P. Mortuus]

this was an overall good piece. i like the imagry and how you flow.
you got good vocab and damn good concepts. you show good understanding and are more knowledgable than i thought. well done.

Preciate it, all my previous rhymes were written in under 40 minutes, this one i spent atleast 2 days in makin' and so far my efforts payin off by all the preciation i'm recieving

[-IsIs-]

nice piece b. havent really seen so many of your pieces lately. this is easily one of the best youve done. the flow was on point in conjunction with the structure, rhyme-sheme imagery etc. the topic chosen was dope i liked the description for the imagery and the vocab grab was also dope. overall not much needed for improvement to perfect this. overall 9.5/10.

-Peace

[P. Mortuus]

nice piece b. havent really seen so many of your pieces lately. this is easily one of the best youve done. the flow was on point in conjunction with the structure, rhyme-sheme imagery etc. the topic chosen was dope i liked the description for the imagery and the vocab grab was also dope. overall not much needed for improvement to perfect this. overall 9.5/10.

-Peace

Thanks preciate it, i aint been writing stuuf too recently and yeah this most likely is my best piece by far.

[P. Mortuus]

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[P. Mortuus]

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[GANGSTA DISCIPLE]

Pretty Good Piece Man I Feel Like U Had A Lot To Say And The Whole Element Of This Story Was Fuckin Dope Man I Wish I Could Come Up Wit Some Shit Like Dat U Should Try Some Poetry Pieces I'm More Into That Type Shit

[P. Mortuus]

Pretty Good Piece Man I Feel Like U Had A Lot To Say And The Whole Element Of This Story Was Fuckin Dope Man I Wish I Could Come Up Wit Some Shit Like Dat U Should Try Some Poetry Pieces I'm More Into That Type Shit

Thaks for the preciation dog, i used ta do poetry but in urdu, only a bit....i consider my oms as ma poetic pieces

[P. Mortuus]

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