I'm The beast of The mic.

[Soule]

I'm the beast of the mic, can't get no satisfaction
Step aside 'cause it's time for some action
I'm a sick rhyme sayer with a kung fu grip
I get the job done 'stead of talkin' about shit


Early in the mornin I'm up and I'm at 'em
Hopin' one day my album goes platinum
Rockin that mic so viciously, deliciously, not maliciously
When atmospheric pressure and vapor pressure converge
There's a party surge, so I must emerge
Get the people hyped and keep going nonstop
Knock the party off the meter when the bassline drops
The last of the brohicans is speakin'
The one that you turn to each and every weekend
Risin', peakin', while the bump is beatin'
Don't turn back, no retreatin'
You can see my vision, you can feel my force
Time to hit the trail boy, the mic is my horse
I tantalize and tickle your tympanic with my English
Smile as you listen to the ruckus as I bring this
I'm comin' with the best and fresh from out west
Bus driver takin' you to school to pass the test
See I'm lyrically hypnotic, at times even psychotic
Erotic, bionic and it may leave you catatonic



I'm a beast on the mic, can't get no satisfaction
Step aside 'cause it's time for some action
I'm a sick rhyme sayer with a kung fu grip
I get the job done 'stead of talkin' about shit

[Superintel]

that was preety nice could of been better if you used more wordplay and creativity but overall that was a great peice man.

Early in the mornin I'm up and I'm at 'em
Hopin' one day my album goes platinum
Rockin that mic so viciously, deliciously, not maliciously
When atmospheric pressure and vapor pressure converge
There's a party surge, so I must emerge
Get the people hyped and keep going nonstop
Knock the party off the meter when the bassline drops
The last of the brohicans is speakin'
The one that you turn to each and every weekend
Risin', peakin', while the bump is beatin'
Don't turn back, no retreatin'


^^^those lines were ok but could of been more creative with worplay and vocab

[Soule]

Ty.

[Superintel]

no problem