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Thread: American Abstract; My Aphrodisiac

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    American Abstract; My Aphrodisiac

    When Hillary declared herself mother nature,
    I stopped hugging trees and used protection
    against big fig leaf feminists turned hitler.
    It's their quick knee-jerk reaction to insert
    a smirk with satisfaction, teasing Condoleezza
    while they slide between the gaps in her teeth;
    pleasing the country and each leader's policy.
    It's treason if she doesn't suck off our hardships
    as Lady Liberty spreads her legs, eggs anxious
    for foriegn sea men with dicks like anchors;
    erect and ready to penetrate her curved borders.

    We sleep with donkeys and elephants like
    Trojans who couldn't ride their high horse.
    Spur the moment and direct me towards intercourse
    or I'll resort to the absurd whores lined outside
    the now off-white house, with fish-net picket signs
    fighting about who's debt is more inadequate.
    I'm not one to omit abuse but if the condom fits
    wear it, or the tear wont fix their broke-backs
    because Mt. Rushmore has cracked it's assets
    after Old Faithful opened it's hole to tourists,
    and terrorists paid Gore to claim he tapped that.

    The legislation of prostitution would never
    pass a Bill, unless the meeting was held
    in the Oral Office for the orgy circles of senators.
    Every public affair is tied together by a strand
    of pubic hairs from small ball and chain-gangs
    while Cheney takes aim; shooting off his full load.
    His good will found hunting for a view of Fox nudes,
    while social commentaters wait to debate over who
    gets the permit to masterbate to the late news.

    So establish a date for my sex court appeal
    and I'll arrive in hand-cuffs, then stand up
    for tough love, if justice had whips and gloves.
    My lawyer could fake a make-over if Dragnet
    captured Walter Cronkite's transvesdike look-alike
    that taped over the old classic, Debbie Does
    Dallas, just to record the scandal at Water Gate.
    Age forty eight and Tom Sawyers still being
    molested by bald eagles to stall people under
    the evil seal; suggesting we rape truth sober.

    I didn't notice the talking heads wore man-hoods
    to conceal wonder for the twin tower's trade-goods.
    It took that vasectomy of New York's prostates
    to cum in trajectory towards the nations we hate.
    But how do you judge smut since beer guts became
    the sears club give-away, for heavy weights
    that'd bust their nuts under the gavel of foul-play.
    Eat your salad in proportion to votes pro abortion
    then face your television as CNN shows porn or holds
    erotic elections on wich corporation has a bigger penis,
    that created a distorted baby fetus born yesterday.
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    of everything existing.
    Po'ethics
    abstanticollective.

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    omg dude this is dizzzzope i loved it man, the daily ritual;s and routine of this land,the government,everyday arguments just reality and the ridiculous shit we go through these days its crazy, i mean dope concept and original way you wrote this man the ryhme scheme was fantastic, the imagery was very vivid and painted a realistic picture, i mean dawg nice shit the vocabulary was above average and all anways very good read.
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    Quote Originally Posted by ~G~
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    I'll have em up after work this afternoon
    and I'll grab 3 since they're late.
    hopefully no one will close it before then.


    and thanks for the read Kaotic
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    nice piece good structure, wordplay, an you sticked 2 the topic............pz.

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    slaps people for sleeping on this.

    This was very well done, the creativity was top notch here. Damn great ideas went into this, such an original way to say something so many people are trying to but fail in OM. Just over all great fucken peice, imagery was insane, the pictures you painted were perfect. You keep it fun and entertianing without going over board and the slick metaphors were seriously dope. Well done man, you owned this topic and demonstrated what could be done with a poltical take and still remain art in it's finest.

    this should not be slept on, this was dope!

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    good shit dogg mad hott keep dpin ur thang

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    *wonders if Murder$Money even read this*
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    Your creativity in this was very good i enjoyed it alot. . Your imagery was amazing the way it painted out the story as you read along was perfect. You had some very nice metaphors in here... i really enjoyed this alot. you really stuck to the topic and nailed it .. i espically like it due to its political stand and everything.... very nice indeed. Keep at it

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    thanks man, appreciate the read.
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    shit was smooth ya know kind of too deep for my taste ya know I like to stay in the realms of the hood and good and politics is aiight but it just ain't that serious for me but can't hate shits hot keep it up

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