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    Jack The Jackel

    i spit on the corner at night, dreaming up conspericary theories
    the cost is dearly to fright,cas theres no fear in me, if so why half the time i find my self up a TREE,not knowing how i got there, cas im cause of hereditary hair loss, cas i fucked my boss es daughter after he orded a restraing order on me normaLY ird be"like fine "this time i pulled out my nine cocked it back,BOOM
    being wack is my day job at night i get in to fights with bounces, fuck ounces i smoke pounds, like mr burns you come on my propty"smithers relase the hounds"
    theres a price on my head so to you im better off not dead though if were up to me to hatch a diabolic plan ,ima smuggle you in a private jet an drop you in japan, run you ova witha blue van,get va fake tan,drop your torso in missigan lake, and dislove your arms an legs in a pan using acid,i may seem placid but thats a mistake, people commonly make, recently im constantly at the observeotory looking for my real father like super man my whole lifes a sham,god dam its a conspeary backtearly my name backwards is D-A-M, so just clam up an stop complaning about the rain, cas last week i was i was abducted by alians again when will you listen to me ? and stop dissing me,cant you see your just pissing ME OFF,
    you wouldent understand how i sleep cas im constantly walking up and down your streets my methors are so complex to you hores that i cas break 12 laws by the time it takes the crowd to give me an aplause

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    my methors are so complex to you hores, that i can break 12 laws in the time it takes the crowd to give me an aplause.

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    shit i liked this drop, evrythin was nice in it, tho i woulda liked to of seen more multi's over all it was good shit tho, keep droppin

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    I think ya should try and improve on your structure, and take the time in accutally spaceing your words out so it flows alot better, but overall this peice was a little below average but a margain away from being up ta par. decent read. keep blessin n stay up

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    thx for this >>>>haha

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    Real battle and all fight plan is set forth for the fixing of the goals for humans. Element of the file and 6 dollar essay review is cited for the turns for the joys. Plant is fit in the mid of the joyful and all means for the punctuation or all goals.

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