I Am Unreal. vs. A$tonish (PINK SLIPS 1000 POSTS TO VOTE!)

[I Am Unreal.]

10 -15 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Hate Votes
No Biting
No D/r, Etc.
1000 Post Minimum To Vote With A Minimum 6 Month Experience On The Site.
3-0 Will Be Considered A Knockout, At Which Point The Loser Will Have A 6 Month I.p Address Ban.

Check By Midnight Tonight
Post By Midnight Tommorrow

Consider Me Checked In.

[A$tonish]

check.
Guess i gotta drop sol presence now too cus of some young bitch ass kid beefin with me. (*remembers leaving cubix box because Def Angel was actin the same way*) hmmm check my sig and see what happened to him. I expect no less in this battle.

[I Am Unreal.]

ASStonish took his chances and got bit by the dice
Cause he tried to get with the T.I.T...
........And got rejected......................... TWICE!
In light of this A$$; $ signs make you look bankrupt dude

Stupid people make mistakes.

^^Which is why your fuckin parents gave birth to you^^
And he's still searching for the "s" on his keyboard...
......Ass ya need to stop n' breathe...
.........I'm amazed he can type - this faggot can't even read*
You cheated in battle... just check the rules jew!

A$tonish dqued over upping

Call me "flamethrower" the way I toss this fag to DQ.*
You ain't Ca$ino Rama, you can't deal excitement...
Fuck structure, you can't understand what alignment (a line ment)
And im $pent, really, 'cause fake personals are a waste.
But as not to embarrass you, here... so is this space





















You're a disgrace to me, another stitch in my threads
So when you hand over your password...
...........................................I'll change it to "dead."...........




*He failed to read the rules about upping.
*Flamethrower is a burger at DQ (dairy queen).
Ps. Don't try and get me disqualified, A$.

-osdfh dfodsfn vdfsog dg osdfgnsdon sdgoh...
...dsfu dfohsd dfosh......
.............. dfosduhfd dsfug fuweig wdifug...

-counts as two lines, therefore, my verse = 14 lines.
so to you.

[A$tonish]

You fucked up.........not only am i gonna expose your wackness but ima expose you period with this one..............check it


Here comes another easy victory, your dead where you stand,
When i getcha password ima change your name to I Am barred and banned,
You little faggot, take your wack ass shit back to RV,
Cus I also lost countless braincells; when readin your poetry,
Lyrically or on the written's,its not fair, you aint this Ill,


So i'll shrink down my text, to compensate for your lack of skill,


If your unreal that explains why your rhymes are never live,
cus I already killed you once; count; 1, 2, 3, 4, 5,
So 5 votes +o 1? can you do the math-e-matics?
that equals 6 months you'll be gone,lurking in the shadows like crack-E-addicts,
Your horrific rhymin skill isn't even scary yo,
Cus salmonella's tha sickest shit to come out of ontario,
Man your sad; jus look at your flows and ya pic mitch,
Or better yet look at this proof that your a homo ya sick bitch


*Crack-E-Addicts= just like a E-thug or a E any thing else. I'm just referring to the fact that after he gets banned for 6 months he'll be feindin like a crack addict
*barred and banned= his name on RV is barr
*his name is mitch
*yes thats actually him in a group of dudes with his dong out.

[XM]

Damn good battle....

Unreal:
Highly impressed, neva seen one of your drops before, and neither on RV even tho i was there only for a little while, punches to personals, personals to punches with wittiness and complexity and creativity it was a damn good verse no real downfall to it structure was acceptable and that lil space line was funny as hell

Astonish:
Was very impressed by your verse also i don't believe i've seen ne of your drops either but this one here was good, especially that like size change of the font line it was the first time i've seen it used, so im sure it isn't played, some decent punches and personals structure kinda got confuse'n at the end and 1 or 2 of your lines weren't that good and could've been worded better but still damn good job

Sorry this is a pink slip match....

V-Unreal for come'n harder throughout his verse, ho hate

[Mystery~Murdera]

upping, loser is banned for one day, lol

[A$tonish]

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^LMFAO
Thanx for clearing that up mystery lol.
If i lose i hope my banned day is a sat or sun cus RB really helps me pass time at work during the week lol.
Uppin #2 since my other one got erased lol
Peace

[A$tonish]

uppin, c'mon ppl im not just sayin this but this is a pretty good battle i think.
Don't sleep.
Peace.

[I Am Unreal.]

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[I Am Unreal.]

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[A$tonish]

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[I Am Unreal.]

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[A$tonish]

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[mindstyle.]

ASStonish took his chances and got bit by the dice
Cause he tried to get with the T.I.T...
........And got rejected......................... TWICE!
-ok i guess, nothing special just a fact stated...
In light of this A$$; $ signs make you look bankrupt dude
Quote:
Originally Posted by I Am Unreal.
Stupid people make mistakes.

^^Which is why your fuckin parents gave birth to you^^
-kinda played...
And he's still searching for the "s" on his keyboard...
......Ass ya need to stop n' breathe...
.........I'm amazed he can type - this faggot can't even read*
-last line ruined this punch...
You cheated in battle... just check the rules jew!
Quote:
Originally Posted by Tim
A$tonish dqued over upping

Call me "flamethrower" the way I toss this fag to DQ.*
-not great...
You ain't Ca$ino Rama, you can't deal excitement...
Fuck structure, you can't understand what alignment (a line ment)
-good one
And im $pent, really, 'cause fake personals are a waste.
But as not to embarrass you, here... so is this space
-ok, again nothing special....
You're a disgrace to me, another stitch in my threads
So when you hand over your password...
...........................................I'll change it to "dead."...........
-blah, ok...


if i sum up, some good attempts at punches, some didnt work out very good, but you did have one good line, some of the others had potential if you reworded them...


vs.


Here comes another easy victory, your dead where you stand,
When i getcha password ima change your name to I Am barred and banned,
-umm is that feeding off unreal`s verse? anyways nothing special....
You little faggot, take your wack ass shit back to RV,
Cus I also lost countless braincells; when readin your poetry,
-nothing hard hitting....
Lyrically or on the written's,its not fair, you aint this Ill,
So i'll shrink down my text, to compensate for your lack of skill,
-sounds good but when you think about it, it doesnt make sense
If your unreal that explains why your rhymes are never live,
cus I already killed you once; count; 1, 2, 3, 4, 5,
-nah, good setup but i looked at who voted for you and nobody from those knows what a good verse is...
So 5 votes +o 1? can you do the math-e-matics?
that equals 6 months you'll be gone,lurking in the shadows like crack-E-addicts,
-ok, but you should re word it
Your horrific rhymin skill isn't even scary yo,
Cus salmonella's tha sickest shit to come out of ontario,
-lmao
Man your sad; jus look at your flows and ya pic mitch,
Or better yet look at this proof that your a homo ya sick bitch
-blah....

you sure wasnt as consistant as unreal was but you had like 2 good lines, so its 2 good lines from ass vs. one good line from unreal

i wont poll yet, you two decide if i can, cuz ive been here for like 2-3 months

anyways /v ass barely

[I Am Unreal.]

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