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    Running Scared (Based On The Movie)

    I'm running scared, I'm running scared on my own two feet
    I'm running scared, I'm running scared with my own two eyes
    I'm running scared, I'm running scared away from my defeat
    I'm running scared, I'm running scared away from my demise

    Six AM me, Tommy and Sal are doing a meth deal with the black men
    We using a black pen, please god forgive me for this is another sin
    We're almost done when 3 men bust through the fucking door
    At first he calls Tommy a whore, the decks him down to the floor
    They start cussing us out in italian, like we dont fucking understand
    A gun in he right hand, A suitcase in his left, lets do what we planned
    Wally the oldest Jamaican slits one of the mens ankle, Tommy hids his gun
    All three Jamiaicans die, "Shit muthafucka aint this just so much fucking fun"
    Tommy shoots a man in the dick, Sal tackles another one, I run and hide
    I see the shot man to my side, Sal also ran to hide and Tommy fireing to ride
    After bout 20 minutes of endless shooting and cussing. 1 dead man, one hurt
    The leader ran away, the injured man pleaes and reaches into his bloody shirt
    Tommy shoots him, a wallet opens up and shows a badge, a fucking cop
    On top of that, we did a meth lab and shot down 2 cops, anything on top?
    We leave but Tommy tells me to get rid of our peices, I'll hide it at home
    Newyork aint anything like rome, Nah I miss good ol Italy, we lived in Rome


    I'm running scared, I'm running scared on my own two feet
    I'm running scared, I'm running scared with my own two eyes
    I'm running scared, I'm running scared away from my defeat
    I'm running scared, I'm running scared away from my demise

    That night at dinner we hear gun fire at Olesk's house next door
    We were ok untill a bullet flew through the window, family hits the floor
    "Fucking Russian peice of shit, I'm gonna kill him" I hate that Fucker
    After he talks shit my my mother and my brother, any one other
    I get my colt 45 and head over to his front door, I'm gonna kill this prick
    "Joey dont be a damn hero" think she might wanna be on my dick?
    I get inside and tell Kerdash to get down, "Where is he? In the kitchen"?
    I go inside but the pricks been shot, covering the wound with a chicken
    "What the fuck happened and where's Olesk? Where the fuck is he!?"
    "Who give a fuck I'm the one shot, Did you give him the peice"
    I call 911, later on find out the gun was Tommies cop hot gun
    I run in my house and stare at my son, "Olesk has one of my guns"!
    "If I dont get that back Nikki, I'm gonna end up dead.....DEAD!"
    "I didnt know please, I didnt know" "DID YOU HEAR WHAT I SAID"!
    Nikki goes to his room to write down their hideing spots around town
    I look at my wife then I stare towerds the ground, Rumors going around?


    I'm running scared, I'm running scared on my own two feet
    I'm running scared, I'm running scared with my own two eyes
    I'm running scared, I'm running scared away from my defeat
    I'm running scared, I'm running scared away from my demise


    Later on Tommy and Sal take me and Olesk to the dumpster's, Am I gonna die
    I foud Olesk after my wife saved him from sick people, "Did you cry"
    "Dont shoot me infront of the kid you sick fucking prick" "What kid"
    "Oh the russian? Dont worry he already ran in fear and hid"
    "No body knows no body" Tommy turns and shoots Sal in the head
    "WHAT THE FUCK!" Guess Sal has been undercover, know he's dead
    "One Sports Bag....$60, One Segular phone...$100" What the fuck
    "One tiny syntext bomb.....$500, One Dead Rotten Cop...Pricless fuck"
    "Get in the car and fallow me....Dont get you'r punk ass lost"
    Didnt know the Italian Mafia knew how much shit cost


    I'm running scared, I'm running scared on my own two feet
    I'm running scared, I'm running scared with my own two eyes
    I'm running scared, I'm running scared away from my defeat
    I'm running scared, I'm running scared away from my demise

    We get to the NewJersey Hocky Arena, And what the fuck do I see
    The Italian and Russina Mafia teaming up, they all glare at me
    After bout 30 minutes of bullshit talking and yelling, They throw me down
    "Dont hurt the kid you fucking fags" I'm gonna die on the ground
    Next thing I know Tommy freaks out and shoots a russian, then dies
    A huge shootout starts, Olesk runs and hides, I grab a gun, Tommy sighs
    I shoot a russian down, then get my ass kicked by a NJ Razor player
    "WHAT THE FUCK!" Letter on I shoot down that rookie player
    It ends up being me vs Franky, Leader of the Italian Mafia, a chump
    "You got my son killes you bitch" " Where the fuck are you from"
    I trip him and shoot a chunck out of his skull, Bloodevery where
    The cops show up. "Officer Joe how are you?" "Running Scared"


    I'm running scared, I'm running scared on my own two feet
    I'm running scared, I'm running scared with my own two eyes
    I'm running scared, I'm running scared away from my defeat
    I'm running scared, I'm running scared away from my demise

    The next morning me and Olesk go to eat breakfast before we talk to his mom
    "Well well well, if it isnt lil Charley Brown""I'm gonna cut you back to Vietnam"
    "Hey Fucker" I throw a book at Pimp Daddy Will, Then break his left arm
    I kill his two hoes then go to kill off his 50 year okld charm, he gets alarmed
    Pulls out the "Hot" gun, Shoots me in the rib, and I stab him in the throat
    I throw Olesk into the car and then I start driveing home, run over a goat
    "Please Mr.Gisel we have to get you to a hospital....you've been shot"
    Shit, "I have not" My vision goes blurry and I run into a mud pot
    Almost crash into my house, I hear my wife screaming "Nikki call 911!"
    "Baby dont fucking do this to me, come the fuck on""Wheres my son"
    We have a huge emotional break down together, then I black out and faint
    Only thing I remember was the smell of burnt down house paint


    I'm running scared, I'm running scared on my own two feet
    I'm running scared, I'm running scared with my own two eyes
    I'm running scared, I'm running scared away from my defeat
    I'm running scared, I'm running scared away from my demise

    2 years later Olesk's mom has died and left a note confirming us as his parents
    I have a fake funeral, consider it as a early retirement, isnt it a apperent
    And on my grave stone is only says 2 words, no one really cared
    Right in the middle it says "Joey David Gisel...Running Scare"


    I'm running scared, I'm running scared on my own two feet
    I'm running scared, I'm running scared with my own two eyes
    I'm running scared, I'm running scared away from my defeat
    I'm running scared, I'm running scared away from my demise


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    liked this, thought it was good, nice mettas and structure
    Mighty TBC


    Big Up U.K.

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    Thnkx and Rise.

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    Rise I know it's long.

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    Sorry.

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    the rhyme-scheme was a bit off(like im the one to talk:P). but hell, i liked it! and you know...sometimes the lines where a bit to long....but keep it up man!

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    I’m a white boy coming at you
    You feeling scared?
    Start running motherfucka
    Got you pinned down in a corner with a knife to yo’ eye
    You start thinking have you ever done anything to deserve not to die!? - Into

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    lol i know buty it kept the stoery good. thnx.

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    yeah, i mean, it would have been worse if you cut it...then we wouldent get the full picture of the movie...

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    I’m a white boy coming at you
    You feeling scared?
    Start running motherfucka
    Got you pinned down in a corner with a knife to yo’ eye
    You start thinking have you ever done anything to deserve not to die!? - Into

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    lol

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    The flow wasn't very smooth...and the rhymes weren't on point. I like the story you were telling, though I haven't seen the movie you said it was based off of. :\ I just feel that it could have used more detail and imagery. Also, I didn't like the chorus. :\ I don't know why...I just didn't. Keep Elevating.

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    Thnkx I guess.

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    ^ Its not hate... its just where there is room for improvment
    I'm not back...I'm simply bored out of my mind.
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    Lol Get on MSN.

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