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Pens Ill
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checkin in.....BTW are you the real crucial or did he give you the name?
i'm in
It's like this....
You ain't dope son....I've heard you're the wackest ho
Bitch ain't alias bound....he can't reach the Staus Quo
What happened though?.........Crucial used to be dope
Now you only drop hard...when your parachute's broke
Ain't scared of you though.......you ain't close to a vet
Take a picture.......it's the only way you posin a threat
At school I hated Pens Ills so I broke them bitches easy
I won period < thats what ya call ya menstrual bleeding
I'm laughing at this kid...seriously this guys a fuckin joke
He's tied up in hope....no wonder he's got his in the rope
And to explain my first line punch....Crucial's alias is Status Quo...
I aint commin with that played shit..
Cliché’s bitch, ive had enough of that played shit, its fair
Ya verse’l never be well rounded when it looks like a square
Only noobs are still stuck on structure, so im sendin it out
Ya verse looks like a box, I guess it resembles ya house
Fuck guns, no ones buckin at Five, but I laugh dunny
Cuz when Five bucks, - I end up usin it for gas money
Five tried to be ranked high, I told him to battle I know that it works
But I got high five <cuz he musta been when he posted his verse!
Nigga, Ill admit you caught me sleepin, I didn’t put the lock in
Ya moms mad, You shoulda knocked before you walked in!
-YALL MUSTA FORGOT
Ouch that parachute line is bitten Five i'll get lniks in a bit.
imma have to vote for pens ill on this one, he had 3 original good punches in his verse as compared to five who only had one imo. five gotta stop trying so hard to have good structure because it doesnt really matter that much. you guys are both on similar levels but pens just came harder this time. but five, bolding the period was kinda whack and insulting as a voter, feel me? but yeah, i'm just gunna have to go with pens for harder punches and overall more polished shit.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=299567
Vote on my battles and I'll RTF
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I will battle you and merk you, PM me to test it.
wtf, i didnt know you had to have 100 posts to vote, well whatever, i left yall some feedback and shit
Vote on my battles and I'll RTF
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I will battle you and merk you, PM me to test it.
I think theres a biter here ..... shit.
I didn't bite...it's called flipping...so get out of here............................................
We'll Let Feeble Decide.
fuck all that..
Let votes decide
I want people to know I merked even though he bit.
nothing
vs
Fuck guns, no ones buckin at Five, but I laugh dunny
Cuz when Five bucks, - I end up usin it for gas money
decent battle, but five didnt bring anything to the table alltho he made a poor attempt at a flip.. all you did was change a couple of words.. thats not a flip its called a bite... flip is when you see a concept and reword it in a different way.. but yeah your verse was weak.. crucial.. seen you come alot harder.. alltho you didnt need to come hard here.. the high five shit was cool too but i seen a simliar concept before..
v/pens ill
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