10 lines
blind spit'
house rules
10min check
verse due by midnight.
.SMURF.
S.ilent K.illa
10 lines
blind spit'
house rules
10min check
verse due by midnight.
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Checkin-In
Long time limit but o well good luck anywayz
word lol good luck.......check
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I got this, merk em' quick, tie em to a animated crusafix
Cuz This Papa Smurf dont deserve to live....................
................................but first let his record lose-a-bit
This Lil punk's hours are numbered, but his life was already gone anyway
This kid is kinda old-fashioned, but im telling ya this aint ya "Happy Days"
You're very cool<---- and by that i meant after a burned you
Bitch is soft, fucka Land-o-Lake......................................
..........................................no shit anybody could churn you
But let me get real......to the point cuz im just playing around
He's real serious, not........lord knows we can't fool a clown
Don't try and make me laugh wishing me good luck, makes me choke
I came to do some damage to this bitch, but I aint mean to crack-a-joke
Blah.....Quick Key
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imma break ya glasses and have ya face feelin Side~Lens (Silence)
Its getting late so imma Kill ya (Killa).....
............heat cuz this is where ya night~Ends
theres no describing it, ya so silent ya raps be~hiding
i'll spit all ova ya...
.... ya try to punch it away - but ya gloves need~shinin
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...36#post4759236
Originally Posted by Silent_Killa911
Ya so silent, Crews dont even notice you.. ya musta gone ghost
ya so silent ya "choke"...
i dont even have to have "punchlines"... "ya punch ya own throat"
_____Break -- a Textee has been murdered_____
_____Please stay tuned for a further broadcast_____
*Dialing 911* Excuse me i have an emergency
we have a hurtin emcee....he needs to be helped Urgently.....His flow aint Wording~see...... and his punches hit soft like a fly, he just disturbin me.... i think he diseased cus his heats only burning~pee... he considered a killa but y this dude aint murkin me???
We need *silence* - its getting "Dark", cuz i dont want me murking ya to get violent..... so Heres sum trident, so ya can be mint condition, so when i punch ya... ya "lights end".... haha now dats how ya break *silent* so da "Night~Begins"
Haha quick drop -- but hey dont get none of the wordplay or punches - ask and i will explain
wtf how mny lines is that? uppin 1
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10 Lines
or 6 Lines with 2 bars which = 10 Lines
uppin ~2~ please vote
Hands are bloody, pressed through glass
Glimpse of only hand prints, Then I fade back into the Past...
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dats not 10, so i COULD dq u, idk...uppin 2
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i could post it to be 10 lines which would be da same verse -- they stretched which are considered bars......... so do wut ya do --- if i aint post 10
neither did ya
i counted 12/
Hands are bloody, pressed through glass
Glimpse of only hand prints, Then I fade back into the Past...
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um i counted 10 on killa
and who noes how many on you...
smurf ya otha battle was good but want happened here?!?
Killa won...he had betta punchlines n his shit was readable!
i had to read your like 3 times b4 i got it to me ya structure is
horrible...
thats all that needs to be said
v//Silent!
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I'll Take Ya Nigga's Niggas Yah Nigga's Bitches Yah Bitches Niggas And Yo Bitches Bitches. Damn, What You Got Left Homie?" *Dead*
I got this, merk em' quick, tie em to a animated crusafix
Cuz This Papa Smurf dont deserve to live....................
................................but first let his record lose-a-bit
^^ was tha only bar outta both drops that was really good that i liked...Vote=S.ilent for atleast tryna use decent concepts and not threats...SMURF i dunno your verse was jus threats and stuff and you said his name like evryline...we kno who you are talkin bot so dont do that...plus you dropped ovr tha limit and still couldnt manage to do better...structure was off to...S.ilent i wasnt feelin sum of your shit but tha 2 lines i put at that top but you still managed to have a better verse all tho you could have worded sum of your ish better but overall your verse was better
hmm this battle wasnt as good as i would have hoped, deffinitly a a quicky key on Silents part he usualy drops better. Smurf damn you had alot of forced stuff, if you have to put stuff in (()) it prohably means the wordplay is meh, and it really screws up flow
pretty one sided, Silent for a few dicent lines, nothing quoteable
both hit.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=303022
3 words for SMURF...what...the...hell?
Man SMURF wtf was up with your verse man? I don't even see any real punches in there, you completely devoted your verse to nameplay and cheap puns, the only punch you did have was a played one about burning pee. come on man, you can do better, a lot better.
And for silent, you had a pretty good verse, even tho some of your punches weren't too effective, thats ok in this match because he didn't really have any punches at all.
SO...for actually having punches I vote S.K.
Death to All Comers..
iight cxool, uppin 3
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