Letters.

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Troy VS Sparta..

Dear Anticus,

As a god of war. It is hard for me to live
I never thought that I'd be scared like this
Same nightmares every night for the last year
Being a god of war like Ackelese is hard
And if I die. Before I die. I have a poem for you
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Animals with more loyalty then a king
A simple grand of sand with the ability to sing
Grass blowing around with the force of wind
Letters with a plea over the sea being send
Blood thicker then a blade on a sword
Soldiers praying and playing for the lord
Nightmares making me scared to fight
I dont care to be scared. I'll die tonight

REST IN PEACE...Percepus. Cousin of the great Ackelese.


America VS Germany...

Dear Amy,

I love and miss you so much
My brother Danny says Hi
We cant wait to end this war.
With us leading the airforce and all that
I have a poem here for you.
Danny helped me write it.
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Bombs blowing away our land
Impact with contact that I cant stand
Heat heating up my jet. I feel like a vet
Is dinner set I aint ready to leave yet
I miss you and want to go home
But I cant leave little Danny alone
We won the war today and It felt great
Fate was late but I'm coming home late
See you on the other side of Hawii Amy I've missed you well
Germany lost this war. And they all burned in hell


America VS Japan...

Dear Amy,

Me and Danny are being sent to be Captons for the top Airforce groups
He'll lead the A13 Tigers. I'll lead the eagles.
We'll lead them side by side and beat Japan.
They want war they got it. And I remember that poem like butter on bread.
Heres a new one. I know you'll like it alot.
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Red circle on a green jet. Japs are here
They bombed Pearl Harber and I was trembling in fear
I want to end this war darlin so I can come home to you
War is false play while my dramatic life is true
But these soldiers have very little expierence unlike me and Danny
This one guy is obsessed with Candy bars. He has so damn many
This war I think is over. I watched Danny die saving me
I didnt want to see him plea for his life. We should have flead.
We'll have to watch over his baby for him. Barry him in our yard.
For life I want you to know. That for life I'll be scared.

Rest in Peace Danny&Mitch Vanstin.
Best friend of my grandfather.
True war vets.

America VS Iraq...

Dear Jon,

Tell your sister I'm sorry
Tell your niece I miss her
I'll see you soon my lil brother inlaw
But till then I cant do any thing but cry
I made you a poem seeing that you love to rhyme
I hope it helps you with you little Rapbattles site.
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I almost lost my arm today
Afraid that it was in the way
Sand every where like the ocean
Without the sea. Ill to the dead motion
I cant wait to end this war
Every day I miss you guys more
And when I get done here
I'll kill a iraqy like a tiger killed by spear
I watched several men die today Jon
What did we do wrong

Rest in peace Angrew Luther
You'r not dead. But you should be

[Soule]

Leave links and I'll RTF.

[Cody Nash]

it's ok. a couple of the stories seemed a little basic while a couple were decent. i think you do better with these than OM's honestly ...you still have a bit of that random ranting off the storyline bullshit going on but i think you'll overcome it in time as you get older. you've got the idea down, although this idea is probably really common among other sites and poetry competitions. I suggest you stick with originality. You can do it ..

- Nash

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Thanks man.

[Malevolence]

I thought that this was ok.. You had a bunch of misspelled words for the most part & some things you said didn't make much sense some of the time.. I thought that the emotion was decent but it could have been way better.. Bcus if I was in war I would really put my heart into those letters.. The rhyme scheme was ok kind of cluttered & all over the place but alright I guess.. Overall it was decent your metaphors were a little weak bur alright..

[Soule]

Lol I am 13...Cant get much better then waht you see coming from the Strange Light: Great escape colalb I did with Cry. that was my best verse yet. Thank for the feed.