S.ilent K.illa vs Zaverian

[Zaverian]

10lines
blind spit
house rules
10min check
verse due 1hr after check

[Wyte]

word.

check.

[Zaverian]

check

[Wyte]

Z's nuffin, its Strictly business what he does, fuck this bitch
Dude is wack and rhymes horrible....................................
..............................he's the reason why stich has a glitch
I used to like plying with building blocks, now i gotta build him too
S'only to help him elevate, but now he's climbing them, shit what a jew
I got this kid a broomstick 4 x-mas, I stole it and swept em like dust
Put him in a vacumm, he made that shit break................................
...............................................now he'll simultaneously combust
Its time to release this bitch, instead of my home he's the new lease
Nigga is dirty, old school, yea all that, but now he's singing with "Grease"?
Fuck this shit, he's been pwned, s'like im owning mice
I could have gave myself 3-blinds^........................
............but I still wouldnt be able to see his rhymes being nice

Blah. 10 quick

[Zaverian]

lmaoooooo okay, lets go....

females skeet on this mans face....your a trace of DNA, we hope
unless u wanna commit suicide, as an excuse 4 y ya bars'll choke
murder in the first degree...wonder why this faggets alive to see
himself killed silently, with the verse...he'll presently write for me
you suck in height all ya verses seem stout, shit even you doubt
longevity....dont blame ya drought on having ya tooth pulled out
d0mo? prophecy? dark minded?...lOOk$ like all ya wins are rigged
its hopeless for u to breathe, consider what ya ex-girlfriend did..
i'm sure u know a thing or two about losses, don't render details
callin me gay?...da same dude who asked if Bi-Sexuals go 2 Hell?

are u hiding something?

[Wyte]

nigga i aint gay, uppin 1 lol

[Zaverian]

lol

[Fatal.]

Its time to release this bitch, instead of my home he's the new lease
Nigga is dirty, old school, yea all that, but now he's singing with "Grease"?
Fuck this shit, he's been pwned, s'like im owning mice
I could have gave myself 3-blinds^........................
............but I still wouldnt be able to see his rhymes being nice

vs

murder in the first degree...wonder why this faggets alive to see
himself killed silently, with the verse...he'll presently write for me
you suck in height all ya verses seem stout, shit even you doubt
longevity....dont blame ya drought on having ya tooth pulled out

overal i think silent got this. he had more hard hitting
and he kept consistant. nice flow too.rhymes as well.

zav.that shit about bisexual i wasnt feelin that
elevate a lil bit. you had great strucutre and great flow
thats about it. and a few descent punches.

so v/ silent for a better verse

[Soule]

Z's nuffin, its Strictly business what he does, fuck this bitch
Dude is wack and rhymes horrible....................................
..............................he's the reason why stich has a glitch
Nice
I used to like plying with building blocks, now i gotta build him too
S'only to help him elevate, but now he's climbing them, shit what a jew
Ok
I got this kid a broomstick 4 x-mas, I stole it and swept em like dust
Put him in a vacumm, he made that shit break................................
...............................................now he'll simultaneously combust
Ok
Its time to release this bitch, instead of my home he's the new lease
Nigga is dirty, old school, yea all that, but now he's singing with "Grease"?
Ok
Fuck this shit, he's been pwned, s'like im owning mice
I could have gave myself 3-blinds^........................
............but I still wouldnt be able to see his rhymes being nice
Could be worded better but ok ending

VS

females skeet on this mans face....your a trace of DNA, we hope
unless u wanna commit suicide, as an excuse 4 y ya bars'll choke
Ok
murder in the first degree...wonder why this faggets alive to see
himself killed silently, with the verse...he'll presently write for me
No
you suck in height all ya verses seem stout, shit even you doubt
longevity....dont blame ya drought on having ya tooth pulled out
Ok
d0mo? prophecy? dark minded?...lOOk$ like all ya wins are rigged
its hopeless for u to breathe, consider what ya ex-girlfriend did..
No
i'm sure u know a thing or two about losses, don't render details
callin me gay?...da same dude who asked if Bi-Sexuals go 2 Hell?
Could be worded bettr but its decent

Vote//Killa for a over all better peice Keep it up boh of you

[Wyte]

wordness.

.2.

[Wyte]

bump 3!

[Maaco]

Vote killa had th more stronger verrse zav u came with punchs just they didnt hit hard enuff silent your verse was ite had a few good bars witch won the battle for u

V/Silent

[Currensy]

Decent ass battle fam,

Silent n Zaverian , fiya lyrics but i was feelin' Zaverian on this one, liked da flow. Nice

[Red Hooks]

Z's nuffin, its Strictly business what he does, fuck this bitch
Dude is wack and rhymes horrible....................................
..............................he's the reason why stich has a glitch
-no concept was whack and the punch was blah
I used to like plying with building blocks, now i gotta build him too
S'only to help him elevate, but now he's climbing them, shit what a jew
-no again concept was weak and the wording was horrid
I got this kid a broomstick 4 x-mas, I stole it and swept em like dust
Put him in a vacumm, he made that shit break................................
...............................................now he'll simultaneously combust
-no to streched try just getting to the point you'll connect better
Its time to release this bitch, instead of my home he's the new lease
Nigga is dirty, old school, yea all that, but now he's singing with "Grease"?
-no everything was whack about this line no hate
Fuck this shit, he's been pwned, s'like im owning mice
I could have gave myself 3-blinds^........................
............but I still wouldnt be able to see his rhymes being nice
-meh weak closer

silent see you need to work on you're concepts and wording homie it was really off in this battle it was like reading a elementary students written essay i mean if i wasent mistaken you had a punch about lilo & stich i mean how old are you like 11 wtf? i know you could have came better homie matter of fact i've seen you come better step ya game up

vs

females skeet on this mans face....your a trace of DNA, we hope
unless u wanna commit suicide, as an excuse 4 y ya bars'll choke
-meh you should have done more with the wording
murder in the first degree...wonder why this faggets alive to see
himself killed silently, with the verse...he'll presently write for me
-no ,statement
you suck in height all ya verses seem stout, shit even you doubt
longevity....dont blame ya drought on having ya tooth pulled out
-no again you're making statements which makes ya rhyme basic
d0mo? prophecy? dark minded?...lOOk$ like all ya wins are rigged
its hopeless for u to breathe, consider what ya ex-girlfriend did..
-no just because you have a link doesent mean you slack on ur punch
i'm sure u know a thing or two about losses, don't render details
callin me gay?...da same dude who asked if Bi-Sexuals go 2 Hell
-blah

zav you're verse was worser then silents why? because you had so many damn statments i nearly feel asleep.stop stating ya punches and make them into disses i mean look at you're second bar you were just talking.read some LLL battles so you could get the idea of what a punch is

ok this battle was close but im a go with silent on this one because he was TRYING to diss his oppenent and not just talking to him but both of you needs to elavate though no hate

v/Silent

[the Truth.]

alright good battle from both.

no hate to either emcee.

vote - silent

silent - you had nice punches, stayed constant throughout. Your Flow and structure were good too.
Zaverian - no hate man. you had a good verse, structure was nice, but i didn't feel you matched silent's level when it came to punches.