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look..i dont even take nat serius dis kid's dumb & butt.
a straw & sex describe ya skillz...cuzz u FUCKiN-SUCK.
talkin bout his flowz is sick,if so then y nobody notice it?.
& when ya cd drop dogg it wont sale like a broken ship.
i got da heat jus incase i dont walk without it homie.
...............ya crew name verbal intercourse
cuzz ya dont get pussy ya'll jus talk about only.
its no question that im damagin this guy.
he like da ginger ale..jus another mc from canada datz dry.
it dont matter ya'll all get it so if he want it im smackin ya boyfriend.
dis kid's jus like da bug and we all know dat a nat is annoyin
Marv your reps just too funny, its so gay I gotta wreck this dummy
We all Marvins gay as fuck n' only jay thats dopes in second coming
super'll bruise this stupid hick, so fuck this useless prick
I didn't think i'd bring ur mom into this..
till i found out all ya do is bitch
I'll hang this fuck by the ropes, battling me was one thing you hoped
then this fag puts my name in his verse just to think of something dope
you're about to get slaughtered, u'll get more attention in the lobby,fag
Supers droppin heavy shit - bitch you're shits only heavy in a body bag
keep bringing the soft wit, you've lost it n' it aint luck that I'm more Iller
so go ahead n' fill me in on whats new - I don't give a fuck for your filler
ummm u not sayin nothin..so i guess u not gon drop plus 30 minutes passed already..so i guess u lose dont drop ya verse
my badd u drop'd............vote up ppl
are you an idiot? i posted my verse before you even said that.Originally Posted by MaRVJay
wow just wow.
look..i dont even take nat serius dis kid's dumb & butt.
a straw & sex describe ya skillz...cuzz u FUCKiN-SUCK.
^^concept ive seen just worded a lil different..not2bad
talkin bout his flowz is sick,if so then y nobody notice it?.
& when ya cd drop dogg it wont sale like a broken ship.
^^ok
i got da heat jus incase i dont walk without it homie.
...............ya crew name verbal intercourse
cuzz ya dont get pussy ya'll jus talk about only.
^lol..4 some rzon didnt get it the 1st time..but nice
its no question that im damagin this guy.
he like da ginger ale..jus another mc from canada datz dry.
^ok wordplay etc.
it dont matter ya'll all get it so if he want it im smackin ya boyfriend.
dis kid's jus like da bug and we all know dat a nat is annoyin
not 2 bad..
Mar...overall you had some nice punches..just bad flow IMO..and u need to work on wording ur punches better..just a lil choppy.
Marv your reps just too funny, its so gay I gotta wreck this dummy
We all Marvins gay as fuck n' only jay thats dopes in second coming
^^meh..ok
super'll bruise this stupid hick, so fuck this useless prick
I didn't think i'd bring ur mom into this..
till i found out all ya do is bitch
^^ok
I'll hang this fuck by the ropes, battling me was one thing you hoped
then this fag puts my name in his verse just to think of something dope
^^haha...nice
you're about to get slaughtered, u'll get more attention in the lobby,fag
Supers droppin heavy shit - bitch you're shits only heavy in a body bag
^^meh..nice multi.
keep bringing the soft wit, you've lost it n' it aint luck that I'm more Iller
so go ahead n' fill me in on whats new - I don't give a fuck for your filler
^^ok..could have used a different approach to the punch tho..
super....you could have been a lil more direct..but overall you were strong with wording (cept 4 last bar imo)...and just had a smooth verse
overall....this is very much a toss up yall had good things bad things....but in text battles or ne battles at all..i wanna laugh, and supernats like 3 bar made me laugh for w/e reason....
so
vote/supernat
no hate..could easily go either way..
best of luck both of you.
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talkin bout his flowz is sick,if so then y nobody notice it?.
& when ya cd drop dogg it wont sale like a broken ship.
i got da heat jus incase i dont walk without it homie.
...............ya crew name verbal intercourse
cuzz ya dont get pussy ya'll jus talk about only.
-two bars that are worth a quote in this battle from marv.
(vs)
I'll hang this fuck by the ropes, battling me was one thing you hoped
then this fag puts my name in his verse just to think of something dope
you're about to get slaughtered, u'll get more attention in the lobby,fag
Supers droppin heavy shit - bitch you're shits only heavy in a body bag
-2 quoteables in this verse aswell.
my votes goin to nat on this one, i liked his setup to the bodybag punch alot more than anything else i read in this battle.
talkin bout his flowz is sick,if so then y nobody notice it?.
& when ya cd drop dogg it wont sale like a broken ship.
this was you're best bar imo
vs
super'll bruise this stupid hick, so fuck this useless prick
I didn't think i'd bring ur mom into this..
till i found out all ya do is bitch
I'll hang this fuck by the ropes, battling me was one thing you hoped
then this fag puts my name in his verse just to think of something dope
lol this was alright you could have done better with wording tho
well marv i thought you're verse was alright but you need to work on you're wording and supernat i've seen you come better then this before but hey you did enough to win this
v/supernat
ill poll on my alias
but place an honest vote on this like i did here
www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=303855
then this fag puts my name in his verse just to think of something dope
^^^how is dat hott??
uppin this.
look..i dont even take nat serius dis kid's dumb & butt.
a straw & sex describe ya skillz...cuzz u FUCKiN-SUCK.
no, sex jokes are played/wack and this one was horribly executed.
talkin bout his flowz is sick,if so then y nobody notice it?.
& when ya cd drop dogg it wont sale like a broken ship.
using the word "like" as a comparison in punches is kind've played in itself so.
i got da heat jus incase i dont walk without it homie.
...............ya crew name verbal intercourse
cuzz ya dont get pussy ya'll jus talk about only.
no. VI shits played.
its no question that im damagin this guy.
he like da ginger ale..jus another mc from canada datz dry.
....no dude wtf.
it dont matter ya'll all get it so if he want it im smackin ya boyfriend.
dis kid's jus like da bug and we all know dat a nat is annoyin
this could've been dope. but your wordings killed it.
work w/ wording man, you can get dope.
vs.
Marv your reps just too funny, its so gay I gotta wreck this dummy
We all Marvins gay as fuck n' only jay thats dopes in second coming
meh, no. weak.
super'll bruise this stupid hick, so fuck this useless prick
I didn't think i'd bring ur mom into this..
till i found out all ya do is bitch
meh, poorly worded. concepts meh too.
I'll hang this fuck by the ropes, battling me was one thing you hoped
then this fag puts my name in his verse just to think of something dope
ok. nothing special.
you're about to get slaughtered, u'll get more attention in the lobby,fag
Supers droppin heavy shit - bitch you're shits only heavy in a body bag
meh, you use shit like this too much lol. seems like once a verse.
keep bringing the soft wit, you've lost it n' it aint luck that I'm more Iller
so go ahead n' fill me in on whats new - I don't give a fuck for your filler
naw, weak.
weak verse, couple potential punches. but meh at best.
both were weak, but super was more direct w/ shit ..
v. Supernat
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