...Text... vs Peyton Manning

[Fatal.]

Ive beaten you many times before its clear that i`m the best
and you suck, thats why all dope LLL heads gaveup on text
^ don't know if its played against him but i liked it

vs

nothing really

ok this was an alright battle

text you had a descent verse but didnt have much to quote. peyton ur verse was ok. you had some ok lines but the one above is the one that stood out the most to me. both had good flow and strucutre. good rhymes. ok battle overall but peyton had the better verse in my eyes. so no hate

v/peyton by a hair or two

[...Text...]

uppin

[jookz.]

Text got this.........best bar of the battle...
this fags got the touch considerin his names suggest hesgood at ball handlein,
it dont have to b prime time for me to send bullets to the arms of peyton manning!


peyton...not bad but i wasnt feeling ya punches they werent conecting to me.....

not a bad battle though.....


Vote DQed.....not expained well enough.

-Fue

[...Text...]

uppin for last vote

[Cody Nash]

Ive beaten you many times before its clear that i`m the best
and you suck, thats why all dope LLL heads gaveup on text
played. i know cuz i used it .
but you try to act dope but when it comes down your a poser
this dude use to follow his dreams Till i got a restraining order
self glorish shit ..kind've wack. not hard. calling someone a stalker isnt hard.
all your drops are wack there was never a day you were hot
this battle shouldnt be too hard since i`m know for merking dots
he's not that ... guy, lol, so the punch is kind've dumb. this'd just be saying you merk the beginning and ending of his name which isnt even a diss really.
you`ll never be great cause Pey will break you down like the rest
people will start confusing you for tampons....they way i lay text
wow omfg, die for posting this. played since 04 ..
So i`ll end this fast this verse was half and cause you are wack
and yeah text is packing.... cause hes constantly on my sack
nope, thats homo.

sorry pokemon, taytay, whatever the fuck you go by now ..but this verse was horrible. you had one ok line and even that nameplay is played ..you need to come harsher.

vs.

cunt ill penitrate ya offensive lines peyton ull get sacked quiter,
ashes to ashes so ull get scooped up and bagged like kitty litter,
meh, nope. this wasn't harsh at all.
put in ya 2 cents a thoughts deserve a refund,
give ya quarterback and ya head'll catch a punt,
nope, quarterback shits played, good attempt tho.
we could go 18 lines one to match each number,
sting ya ass ray this crocidile hunter will go down under,
naw, crocodile hunter shits played now too ..sorry.
truth b told dots should really come after ya name,
boastin about wins when the dots jus means the end of ya fame....!,
naw dude, not harsh.
this fags got the touch considerin his names suggest hesgood at ball handlein,
it dont have to b prime time for me to send bullets to the arms of peyton manning!
nope, nice try though. just not harsh again.

text, you're getting better ..but this battle here was a bit bleh for you too. i'm going to vote for you because you came a little harder than tay did, but you seriously need to work on grammatical errors and wording.

v. Text, HORRIBLE battle. every punch here was bad.

[Sgt Spliff]

nothing

Vs

nothin

this was a weak battle both of you came with nothing or very little wit and nothing worth quoting, you all could both do way battle text i know you still new so if you took your time to read the LLL i think that that would benifit you majorly it will help you get a better idea of good wording and good wordplay.

V.Text

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=310217
^hit it please