This wsa a dope piece Witness. You had good flow and
structure through the whole drop. You had very good
creativity in this piece. Imgery was dope. A lot of emotion.
Nice rhyme scheme and multis. Overall this was a good read,
I really enjoyed your opening.
My fathers blood, cleanses this body of immorality
His mortality, revealed itself, now he lays by my side
I played with my life, I abused fate, now she gets revenge
My whole life, my family, taken away, in an almighty end
^ I liked that part.
Leave feed on "Wading In The Water" Ill be dropping it shortly.
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